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Peep Show(2sDay Edition) Open Collab

Postby 2sDay » Jan 22nd, '10, 05:31

I listened to this song in my iTunes and got inspired so I'm gonna make my version..... sorry if you don't like my choice of song but I just got motivated :D

(Intro)
C'mon girl,
Keep moving that,
Turn that switch on,
2sDay gonna stun,
(Verse 1)
Girl you really are taking away my "remote control",
Making 2sDay feel that he could float on dough,
My coat in snow, without you I'd explode and go,
And even though we fight 'til our throat get sore,
I devote my whole time and life to not gloat for your,
Sake and peace so don't call me fake cause geez,
I rake your leaves, and I still take your greese,
The essential 1,2,3's, and fundamental A,B,C's,
I learn when I'm on that Ecstacy, so come with me,
And I'll set you free, fuck like If I had terretz in me,
Wow, shorty what a nice, sexy, wonderful peep show,
You've prepared for me through this puny peek hole,

that's it until someone agrees to work with me :shifty:
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Re: Peep Show(2sDay Edition) Open Collab

Postby Spyder » Jan 22nd, '10, 05:34

i feel ya rhymed to rhymed here man

float on dough... coat in snow... what :confusion:
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Re: Peep Show(2sDay Edition) Open Collab

Postby shadyfreakzul » Jan 22nd, '10, 11:26

am open for a collabo esmart
I'm strong, my word is Bond like James
Niggaz be tryin to test, but they 'week' like seven days-Canibus

I don't belong here,my dad fucked my mom in the wrong year.-Budden

like taekwondo you lack punches-Shadyfreakzul

Around here i am the Goat like the Capricorn.-Wale
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Re: Peep Show(2sDay Edition) Open Collab

Postby 2sDay » Jan 22nd, '10, 18:00

Spyder wrote:i feel ya rhymed to rhymed here man

float on dough... coat in snow... what :confusion:

dough as in money if u didn't understand.......
Coat in snow....that means "she" protects me kind of random but yea...
and this song is my version of the song Peep Show by 50 Cent & Eminem ;)
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Re: Peep Show(2sDay Edition) Open Collab

Postby Spyder » Jan 22nd, '10, 19:23

well i had no idea dough meany money, thanks for setting me straight :smoking:
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Re: Peep Show(2sDay Edition) Open Collab

Postby 2sDay » Jan 22nd, '10, 23:01

Spyder wrote:well i had no idea dough meany money, thanks for setting me straight :smoking:

not sure if that's how u spell it but yeah it means money..... :smoking:
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Re: Peep Show(2sDay Edition) Open Collab

Postby Spyder » Jan 22nd, '10, 23:13

2sDay wrote:
Spyder wrote:well i had no idea dough meant money, thanks for setting me straight :smoking:

not sure if that's how u spell it but yeah it means money..... :smoking:


it was sarcasm :shakehead:
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Re: Peep Show(2sDay Edition) Open Collab

Postby 2sDay » Jan 22nd, '10, 23:17

Spyder wrote:
2sDay wrote:
Spyder wrote:well i had no idea dough meant money, thanks for setting me straight :smoking:

not sure if that's how u spell it but yeah it means money..... :smoking:


it was sarcasm :shakehead:

well if it was sarcasm...... :shakehead:
it doesn't take away from the fact that it means money
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Re: Peep Show(2sDay Edition) Open Collab

Postby 2sDay » Jan 23rd, '10, 18:28

bump :whistle:
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Re: Peep Show(2sDay Edition) Open Collab

Postby Arrinef » Jan 23rd, '10, 18:30

2sDay wrote:bump :whistle:

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