I've go the hands of a fallen angel a down to Earth experience,
All this writing with ya eyes open is bound to hurt your weariness,
Flippin burgers like I'm pround to work serious, jobs,
My clearly clenched, weary fist throbs until my yearly fits calm,
All of this cherry lip balm only smoothes the surface,
As I move to work as a useless person,
Like who is certain that it's my broken wings scarin ya,
Hopelees screams, my broken wings paired in two, if they're paired with Zu's,
Tearin your heart into a million peices,
This thrilling piece is a brilliant thesis only if you really need it,
I'm stealing secrets from the hearts of a thousand men,
Chained to my greed, envy and lust so I'm "bound" to sin,
Hangliding from cloud 10 to Numbus 9,
Took me 8 tries to ascend the lies that the hitman tried,
7 seperate sets of heavenly angels,
6 different popes used rope to suddenly strangle,
But only 5 of them ride on the 4 seperate elements,
3 headed dogs guard the entrance for the hell of it,
2 different "profits" disguised as Jesus and Allah,
But only 1 God disguised his name is Yah-hah
Down to Earth experience
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Down to Earth experience
by Yah-hah » Jan 21st, '10, 23:16
"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah
Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol
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Re: Down to Earth experience
by Fa-Q » Jan 22nd, '10, 03:49
That last line is amazing...and the countdown is fuckin crazy...good drop Jus
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Re: Down to Earth experience
by gutawafang » Jan 22nd, '10, 06:20
Wow, it's fucking original man. You put yourself in the shoes of God. Fucking great. But Allah has no physical form though. 
LOL. Never mind that, it's fucking ill. 
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Re: Down to Earth experience
by Yah-hah » Jan 22nd, '10, 06:29
Oh shut up fish lol Thanks yall, I wrote this in English class, now Ima have a whole bunch of new stuff with so much time to write. thanks for diggin it yall
"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah
Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol
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Re: Down to Earth experience
by gutawafang » Jan 22nd, '10, 06:35
Yah-hah wrote:Oh shut up fish lol Thanks yall, I wrote this in English class, now Ima have a whole bunch of new stuff with so much time to write. thanks for diggin it yall
hahahahahahahaa
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Re: Down to Earth experience
by Jambi » Jan 22nd, '10, 07:32
i like this piece Yah-hah
the flow is good the whole time throughout
multies were there, and alot of people mentio vocabulary on alot of pieces here im noticcing.
its not exactly the big words you use, its the words that you dont use often
i think you did that here
want to see more of you
the flow is good the whole time throughout
multies were there, and alot of people mentio vocabulary on alot of pieces here im noticcing.
its not exactly the big words you use, its the words that you dont use often
i think you did that here
want to see more of you
some say the darker the berry, the sweeter the juice
i say the darker the flesh than the deeper the roots - 2pac
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Re: Down to Earth experience
by Yah-hah » Jan 22nd, '10, 18:00
Appreciate it homie. Yeah man multis are kinda my things haha. Yeah I dont usually use all kinds of big words that confuse everybody ya know. Just check out all my other stuff in CW I got a bunch if ya want. Thanks for checkin though homie
"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah
Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol
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Re: Down to Earth experience
by Yah-hah » Feb 2nd, '10, 07:35
Bumpin
"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah
Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol
Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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