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Things Aren't Always As They Seem

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Things Aren't Always As They Seem

Postby Jambi » Jan 22nd, '10, 19:50

Illusions hidden, get you tricked-when your thoughts are eased
Like monstrous beast, waiting, just itching to flaunt his teeth.
Look around this crooked town is battered and shooken now
Under the picture of a crooked smile shit they just took it down.
Mainly because they don’t want you to see the lies
In these eyes, just listen to the sounds of scream and cries.
Never eased cause I, always look for the invisible ink
And when its died down, your safe that minute you think
Things get flipped upside down, are you living a dream
In that moment you realize things are always what they seem.


not really what i write like, i was trying something with this one
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i say the darker the flesh than the deeper the roots - 2pac
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Re: Things Aren't Always As They Seem

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 22nd, '10, 20:50

Great multis bro seriously. really dig it though man
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Things Aren't Always As They Seem

Postby Jambi » Jan 22nd, '10, 22:11

thanks Yah :b:


ten points for the hidden message
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Re: Things Aren't Always As They Seem

Postby Enimee » Jan 22nd, '10, 22:14

def hot drop APPLAUD APPLAUD
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Re: Things Aren't Always As They Seem

Postby Jambi » Jan 22nd, '10, 22:17

haha thanks bro

i hope to drop more often
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Re: Things Aren't Always As They Seem

Postby embm » Jan 22nd, '10, 22:29

gr8 job
i like it :y:
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Re: Things Aren't Always As They Seem

Postby Jambi » Jan 22nd, '10, 22:33

thanks :worship:
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Re: Things Aren't Always As They Seem

Postby embm » Jan 22nd, '10, 22:34

Jambi wrote:thanks :worship:


yw :happy:
keep them comin
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Re: Things Aren't Always As They Seem

Postby Jambi » Jan 22nd, '10, 22:35

yea i got a collab with Edge coming :smoking:
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Re: Things Aren't Always As They Seem

Postby embm » Jan 22nd, '10, 22:37

Jambi wrote:yea i got a collab with Edge coming :smoking:


sweet :p
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