Gangsta Paradise (20 Bars)

[mcZu]

Sight, sound, feeling, what’s wrong with my sense ability
I write, astound, a healing, a song with sensibility
Credibility is short, so no given credit near me
They say it’s unclear see, that I give people a reason to fear me
But it’s a given that people fear what they don’t understand clearly
Under trance daily, feels like I’m riding ‘round in a hansom
A dealer showed me some E, he tried to hand some
This girl created from sounds calls me handsome
But I refrained from that, don’t move E, actors aren’t in demand son
I demand some, call this a live feed epilogue from the brain
I’m standing in front of a crossroad, can’t chose, Kylie Minogue the game
Highly anticipated mind frame, I’m into mind games
Girl, either call back or don’t, yes, I mind games
Play hard to get and you might end up hard to get
As in playing yourself in a position which is by far too sad
You have one of those days where you feel screwed, too bad
My mind is so upside down, I usually wake up on the wrong side of my bed
Ups and downs, usually issue issues on the wrong side of the web
I'm a General, money’s on me, my whole gang green
So you can say we started off on the wrong foot, if you know what I mean...

[Just Silver]

Liked this one a whole lot

only problem to me was it went off flow
at this line
Play hard to get and you might end up hard to get
As in playing yourself in a position which is by far too sad

just my O but other than that little thing it was fantastic

loved the gang green line and the sensibility intro

5/5 worships

[Emadyville]

Dude this was fire, great beginning, great ending, loved the rhymes, flow went off sometimes but it's perspective I'm sure, only thing I can say is for some reason that kylie minogue the game line reminded me of buddens "sammy sosa the game", but this was fire son great great piece

[Strictt Ame]

Solid ass drop..wordplay was on point..gang green was nice, handsome plays were cool, couldve had a bit more power behind em but none the less this was sick..

[mcZu]

Thanks y'all, 'preciate the feed.

[Fa-Q]

I'm jealous of those first two lines...I love word play like that...dope piece Zu

[mcZu]

Thanks Fa-Q, I'll be dropping more than once a week from now on. And I'll focus on using that kind of wordplay with multies and my usual wordplay.

[Element.]

I found this really good,
keep it up