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Postby Edge » Jan 21st, '10, 23:58

im actually thinking of recording this, so let me get imput... i know the structure isnt perfect but thats to enhance the flow that i have for it

As the beat progresses, I build my inner hate
I told you not to test the best, let me reiterate
Guns will obliterate, as I demonstrate this combat
Got guns, grenades, blades. Where the bombs at?
My flow is steady sabotaging tracks
Fingers on the trigger, dislodging gats
Dodging caps, robbing rats, straight obliteration
Always allowing anger amidst alliteration
Acquitting anguish, allowing all atrocities
My ideas are amazing don’t test my hypotheses
You fear this eye brow raising, rapper might be good
claim your misbehaving, you aint even slightly hood
Fight? We could, but youl just end up underground
Lyrics sting like lighting, I got a thunder sound
So I guess that just makes my music a storm
Let me on the track, real hip-hop is born
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: reiteration

Postby Edge » Jan 22nd, '10, 08:06

gunna make me have to bump this shit? :'(
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Re: reiteration

Postby Edge » Jan 22nd, '10, 21:02

alright i see how it is... fuck yal lol
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Re: reiteration

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 22nd, '10, 21:07

Probably the most best rhyme scheme you've had, real sick stuff bro
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: reiteration

Postby embm » Jan 22nd, '10, 22:29

gr8 job :y:
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Re: reiteration

Postby Edge » Jan 23rd, '10, 07:45

thanks guys :D
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Re: reiteration

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 23rd, '10, 07:51

Wow...Edge my respect doubled for you...this shit is foreal dope...I love this style
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Re: reiteration

Postby Edge » Jan 23rd, '10, 08:10

Fa-Q wrote:Wow...Edge my respect doubled for you...this shit is foreal dope...I love this style


haha thanks man i appreciate that :worship:
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