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Vodka nights

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 23rd, '10, 19:44

I actually just found this from awhile back. I really dont remember ever writying it so i'm assumiong I was drunk or something. But here ya go

Oh yeah now the Native isn't so hard,
FUCK!! I'm screaming like I done damaged my spirit,
Yeah thats right I didn't rhyme but never could you hear it,
I'm only writing to not grab this stolen gun,
Yeah thats right TR I do own a gun,
That doesnt make me a ganster in any way shape or form,
Just means I protect myself from when today breaks the storm,
I'm writing with frozen hands that bleed on the ground,
Because all of my pages are stuck to the sleet on the ground,
On the verge of tears cause my fingers are frost bitten,
My mind racin I'm pacing, I'm all trippin,
Waitin escapin the fate of this Native like goddamit,
Walked all the way up the stairs to heavens door but God slammed it,
I'm halfdrunk screaming alone ouside,
Half-done, with half my lungs reeming so stoned and thats why,
My structure is fucked but hell when was it ever good,
The words I hear in my head so silent, hear it? You never could,
Never will I subdue my style for punches,
But that'll make me better or somethin,
Fuck it, my style are the words I speak in my own language,
I'm insane with a tainted brain shit you could never tame it,
So I'm not sorry for a second that none of my lines stick out,
With third-rate punches to tie the sticks down,
Like Fuck all this advice you don't rhyme just to rhyme,
You need better punches and wordplay though it's your first time,
Take all that shit and blow it out your ass,
I'll rhyme how I want in my motorboat with no gas, I'm so fast when I type that I write with the speed of leopards,
When you read it better you won't need to measure,
I can only dream to catch her but my foot got caught in the beads and feathers.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Vodka nights

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 23rd, '10, 20:56

Damn Jus when did you write this...this is dope...multis are spot on...you had to of been blazin not drunk:)
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Re: Vodka nights

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 23rd, '10, 20:59

Naw I havent smoked siince the summer, pretty sure I've written other things when I get drunk cause there are songs I saved but dont remember lol. Thanks bro
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Vodka nights

Postby J Roc » Jan 23rd, '10, 22:13

Waitin escapin the fate of this Native like goddamit,
Walked all the way up the stairs to heavens door but God slammed it,

ha ha ... NICE !
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Re: Vodka nights

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 23rd, '10, 22:19

Thanks homie :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Vodka nights

Postby embm » Jan 24th, '10, 01:28

nice :y:

vodka yum! :p
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Re: Vodka nights

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 24th, '10, 08:31

lol thanks ma
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Vodka nights

Postby Drama Setter » Jan 24th, '10, 08:42

When you read it better you won't need to measure,
I can only dream to catch her but my foot got caught in the beads and feathers.


Awesome bro , I like the way you finish your poem :y:
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props to Coleon and DarkBlade
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Re: Vodka nights

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 24th, '10, 09:21

Thanks homie :y: Always diggin the love
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Vodka nights

Postby embm » Jan 24th, '10, 22:58

Yah-hah wrote:lol thanks ma


did u jus call me ma? :o
:'(
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Re: Vodka nights

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 24th, '10, 23:02

Lol its just something i say to girl my bad haha
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Vodka nights

Postby embm » Jan 25th, '10, 00:57

Yah-hah wrote:Lol its just something i say to girl my bad haha


uhm ok :flower:
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Re: Vodka nights

Postby gvdz » Jan 25th, '10, 01:14

embm wrote:
Yah-hah wrote:lol thanks ma


did u jus call me ma? :o
:'(

hah imnot the only one :p
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Re: Vodka nights

Postby embm » Jan 25th, '10, 01:17

gvdz wrote:
embm wrote:
Yah-hah wrote:lol thanks ma


did u jus call me ma? :o
:'(

hah imnot the only one :p


i think u started this trend :tounge2: :angry:

make me old :'(
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Re: Vodka nights

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 25th, '10, 01:36

Ah I didnt mean to just somethin I say lol my bad ma :shifty:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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