Cardboard Diaries...Pt. 1

[Enimee]

this is the first installation of my soon to be ongoing saga

i got alot of rhymes wrote on the back of cardboard notebook covers, and cardboard boxes...and well just things made out of card board so's ima start droppin um...sometimes random sometimes important messages...number 1
random funny verse imo

im the kinda dude to bring a samurai sword to a gunfight
cause i got a death wish but you betta make sure that its dun right
cause if i get a chance i come back and axe murder that ass
wit a 44 mag and trash bags where i hide your body parts at
and im so damn criminal minded ill leave the scene carryin one of your eyelids
when your from the street, you know its all about timin
and havin leverage on anyone who puts time in, cause then
your possibilities for advancement grow
thats why id opt to go ahead and just stab that hoe
but when you do, make sure that you stab her slow
cause infliction of pain is the best way to make a lastin show
an impression upon any fag who ever laughed at you
and while it may be a drastic move, her screams will attract her dude
and you can go ahead and just stab him too,
now its double homicide and your reign of terror is just beginning
time to go and cut the kitten, then fuck that pussy like GENE simmons

[Strictt Ame]

I dunno why but when people use the word "opt" in their verses the right way that line always stands out to me..sot too sure what makes it pop out to me..but this was ok, not really 'funny' but the creativity and imagery was nice..flow was in and out for me, but I prolly dont spit it like you [pause]..

Overall it was a straight drop..

[Enimee]

yeh thanks for the feedback strictt

[Yah-hah]

Yeah dude was dope cant wait to see more, first lines were raw