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Edge+Jambi - This is my Confession

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Edge+Jambi - This is my Confession

Postby Jambi » Jan 24th, '10, 16:23

Edge
It seems as time goes on, I build on life’s questions
Got misdirected, trying to learn from strife’s lessons
All I know is I got to get past this all this aggression
Not sure whats the right path, this is my confession

Edge
Sitting back blazed, just smoked up all my revenue
Dont know what to do, so I’m sending you to heaven, dude
Getting money for committing atrocious homicides
Gotta get weed money, without it I’m not calm in side
It seems like every night, I just smoke myself sober
I say I’m going to stop, but it seems its never over
Every night drink away my sorrows, bottle of champagne
Got no fucken money, might just rob you for your damn chain
Its a damn shame, leave your man slain, for a couple bucks
I cant get attached, so I fuck, but never cuddle sluts
Getting really depressed, seems like everyday I sleep away
I don’t even wanna live, so now in permanent sleep I lay
And I don’t even know whats with my bad eating habits
I gotta get myself together, before I become a feening addict
I used to be cool, calm and collected, know just what to do
And don’t even think to judge me til you walk up in my shoes

Edge
It seems as time goes on, I build on life’s questions
Got misdirected, trying to learn from strife’s lessons
All I know is I got to get past this all this aggression
Not sure whats the right path, this is my confession

Jambi
In and out of debt and Im constantly loosin my job
Each night ponderin what store Im choosin to rob.
Truth-is im not, the smartest or sharpest knife in the draw
Cause see things change when someone life is in store,
Survivin a war, I should feel good but still im chokin up
Broke as fuck in a hopeless rut, eyes are closin shut.
Notice what I do to keep my head up, eyes to the skies
But when the rain comes all of my pride it just dies,
So why must I try, when I fail at every chance that I get
The damage has hit, wish I could just stand up and quit.

Edge
It seems as time goes on, I build on life’s questions
Got misdirected, trying to learn from strife’s lessons
All I know is I got to get past this all this aggression
Not sure whats the right path, this is my confession
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some say the darker the berry, the sweeter the juice
i say the darker the flesh than the deeper the roots - 2pac
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Re: Edge+Jambi - This is my Confession

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 24th, '10, 16:38

Like the hook and concept...but don't like how it was executed...Edge man...your settling I can sense it...your multis are crisp and they're lazy in this piece and your better than that...these multis would have to be slurred and I know your better than that


Jambi..haven't seen alotta your shit but this was just alright...seems like both your verses could have been better...they weren't bad just not great...


Loved the hook and concept tho
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Re: Edge+Jambi - This is my Confession

Postby Jambi » Jan 24th, '10, 19:10

thanks Fa-Q

i got something comin with Classthe_king so maybe it will be better :sweating:
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Re: Edge+Jambi - This is my Confession

Postby Edge » Jan 24th, '10, 21:02

thanks for the honesty my man
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: Edge+Jambi - This is my Confession

Postby Edge » Jan 24th, '10, 21:05

jw which multis did u think need to be slured
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