Suicide Rap - Slice

by **Slice** » Jan 24th, '10, 16:32

check out my new song "suicide rap"
http://www.myspace.com/slizzle88

feedbacks appreciated :y:

by **°[~CHR!$~]°** » Jan 24th, '10, 19:33

oh nice bist aus deutschland....kool...add me lol

like your rhyme sheme...your recording is uneven at some places..like you go away from the mic and go closer etc.. :unsure:

mixing has too much reverb i guess...delivery seems good but gets pulled down by the mic quality...pronouncation is also allright...since you from bavaria...glad you aint got the bavarian accent goin on in your lyrics...would have sound funny

but yeah room for improvement..just keep at it :y:

by **Slice** » Jan 25th, '10, 12:43

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:oh nice bist aus deutschland....kool...add me lol

like your rhyme sheme...your recording is uneven at some places..like you go away from the mic and go closer etc.. mixing has too much reverb i guess...delivery seems good but gets pulled down by the mic quality...pronouncation is also allright...since you from bavaria...glad you aint got the bavarian accent goin on in your lyrics...would have sound funny but yeah room for improvement..just keep at it

thx for your feedback :y:

lol didn't know that there's someone else from germany :happy:

.. yeah I'm glad too that i don't have no accent

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