Fallin' Keystyle

[mcZu]

A lil keystyle I did in the metro, tweaked it up a bit afterwards (as in typos and such..)

Leave you in critical condition, ICU flow, that’s where I’ll see you
Got an IQ of 230, I spit euphory, the snare is my queue
View blind spots with a vision that shifts, that’s what sight do
Night view, I light a few when I write and dispute
With the kick I get a kick leaving me right in a diss mood
This is what a diss do when I disable this dude
Who thinks he can act rude, my diss able to dislocate his shoulder too
I can be like a soldier too, he a misplaced ogre screwed
And a lower flower that can’t even get a tip see like sober roots
I’ma chauffeur this ripped beat through a ship stu
Capsize the ship too when I press cap and size up with a cig lit too
Got a six sickened up due the fact that the eye lids of Zu
Can’t be closed ‘cause the clause got a stroke now back to the ICU
Why be rude? I might be suit up when I beat up the beat too
That’s what a be at the room do when a wasp is at the hospital

[Emadyville]

Damn, dude that was fuckin raw, def felt like I was reading and hearing a freestyle, idk what happened but like the first half just seemed to flow perfectly and some shit that wasn't even rhyming sounded perfect lol, this was dope man great drop like always

[Yah-hah]

Yeah it didnt even have to rhyme and would have still felt like it all went together. Really dope use of words man good shit bro

[macdaddy019967]

haha that shit was clean nice drop man

[Enimee]

hahaha goood shit bro

[mcZu]

Thanks for the feed guys, 'preciate it.

[Edge]

good shit, esp. for a keystyle

[Spyder]

lovin this Zu
dope for a keystyle bro

[mcZu]

Thanks Spydie and Edge, 'preciate it.

[preest]

Nice drop bro, had some nice lines in there and also I liked the multies you were using

I kinda felt that the lines were a bit long but that could have just been the way I was reading it, nice drop man!!