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[Strictt Ame]

off a track Im doin soon..just want some feedback on it..oh and the flow doesnt fall off at the switch on the 5th bar..the way I slang it it comes out nice..lol


A 4 Seasons ripper..got NOTHIN TO LOSE YALL
Im a cold winner..spring up and SUMMA YA CREW FALL
Im aggressive on the mic..I got SOMETHIN TO PROVE YALL
I bless it when I write..never BLUFFIN ITS TRUE YALL
Too TOUGH THAT YA TOO SMALL..with USELESS SPITS
Look I murder every beat on some CRUCIAL SHIT
You ain’t even speakin a little bit of TRUTH JUST QUIT
You the Invisible Woman..I see THROUGH YA BITCH
Get USED TO THIS..Im bringin that SICK RHYTHM
Its ruthlessness..I don’t care if his CLICKS WITH’EM
They can stay clam or they can catch SHIT WITH’EM
Crashin down Forbes, give a fuck if ya BIG BUSINESS
You gonna be a Mom n Pop Shop when this SHIT FINISHED
Come and match WITS WITH’EM..this bastard SPITS VENOM
With a cobra flow..so it’s a QUICK FINISH
You gonna lost if you’re searchin for BITCH IN’EM

[classthe_king]

Flow was great, multis were great. I liked the line about the invisible woman. This will sound dope recorded

[Strictt Ame]

Thanks fam..I'll return the favor on your drop

[Emadyville]

This was one that seemed rather simple to read, but I feel if you kill it on the mic it will be straight fire, just has that feel. And when I say simple I mean that the multi's seem that way because of how they're made, like in the first 4 havin "ya'll" end it 3 times, but again, I think when recorded a verse like this should shine. I hope the delivery goes with the caps (unless it was just to show off the multi's) because those gave me a real sense of how I felt this verse would sound. Let me know when this is recorded

[Strictt Ame]

Thanks Emady..

By the way, did anybody catch the 4 seasons bar?

[Spyder]

i caught the four seasons bar, but i didnt see how summer fit in
liked this verse bro, should be great in audio

p.s you havent won every battle by KO have you

[Emadyville]

Thanks Emady..

By the way, did anybody catch the 4 seasons bar?

Yeah, it just reminds me of wayne on that dr carter song, yours is 10 times better, but whenever something sounds like wayne it pisses me off, so to no fault of your own, but like I said your's is much better

[macdaddy019967]

i like how you capitalize the letters in your stuff man it makes me see it a whole lot better
i wish everyone else would do the same
guess its just me and you who do that *props*

[Strictt Ame]

Spyder:
Summer - Summa - Some Of..I gotta sling it right tho to make it sound good..
And Ive won all my battle by either KO or TKO whch is a KO in my eyes..

Emady: I dont listen to Lil Wayne much, even though hes from my town..but I do like his shit on "Drop the World"

Mac: I usually dont cap my verses but it does make it easier to catch certain things..


Thanks for the feed yall

[Spyder]

o... well tko ko idk

[Edge]

this was really good man... flow, multi and punches were all very solid