16 lines of venom

by **Edge** » Jan 27th, '10, 01:03

before i get yelled at because of the structure, just know i wasnt caring about that because im working on my flows, and it flowed nice like this... feed appreciated

My punches leave you mumbling like a wordy sentence
My drugs leave you tripping like a nerdy entrance
My raps leave you screaming ‘Holy Shit’ like a dirty penance
My rocket brings the high heat like a mid-thirtys Clemens
But in my raps, you will never find any steroid use
Im always down to get to beefing, I always avoid truce
I deploy troops, cause me im the leader, I’m the Captain
Troops from Staten, get to clappin if u let shit happen
And when I get to rappin, my flows smooth as satin
Verbally attackin, any rat and all his men, when theyr flappin
Their gums, talkin shit, they fall into a trap and, wont make it
I get my shots in like when a foul is flagrant
Im a wondering vagrant, lost without a purpose
But im not worthless, I’m brilliantly worth it
So if you give me a chance Imma blow up like a bomb
Until than, I’m just hanging, sortta like Sadam

Line 4/5- Roger clemens nickname was the Rocket and he used to pitch fast, he used streroids
Last line- Sadam Hussain was hung to be killed