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Not enough hours

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 25th, '10, 20:17

I've got two tests tomorrow and I aint studied a bit,
But I got a smile on my face as if I'm loving this shit,
I got work in in 30 seconds and I'm a mile away,
Walking down there street, erasin my smile away,
My girlfriends sick she got a stomach virus,
Holdin on tight just in case something might slip,
Wakin up too damn early, goin to sleep so late,
Like Yah-hah is it too much? For me no way,
I fucking love it so much strees is so fun,
Look forward to being the best out of no one,
It's like I'm forever stuck in 4:04,
Swear I looked at that clock and it said 4 before,
Go ahead and ignore me more,
My hand is raised but I forgot my storyboard,
I didnt have enough time, how many hours must we play,
Time's up, theres no more hours in the day

I'm trying to live but there's not enought time to,
Not enough to work, school, eat, sleep and rhyme too,
I'm searching for the extra hours on the other side of the rainbow,
But I'm stuck in these plain clothes different hours but the same flows

I've got two tests tomorrow and it's 2 am,
It's Tuesday , who may say that any two may win,
With no lights who say I have no fright,
Drivin in the left lane though the sign said go right,
I gotta admit that I'm scared of these nightmares I might share,
Rarely found I'm cemetary bound yeah I'm right there,
Go to sleep? ha yeah my head wont let me,
I'm fed so get me another pencil cause the leads so heavy,
I'm dead so simply my zombie head wont fit me,
I'm lifting these covers to cover my head,
Trying to find my lover shes under the other bed,
Sleeping above the boogyman he's under me like bones and muscle,
Running full spped in my sleep cause I'm prone to hustle,
And I've grown to love ya just tonights not a good night,
Even my vioce trembles on the phone when I say goodnight,
I made this bed yes but I'll sleep maybe an hour in this night,
Screaming from these bad dreams not enough hours in the night,

I'm trying to live but there's not enought time to,
Not enough to work, school, eat, sleep and rhyme too,
I'm searching for the extra hours on the other side of the rainbow,
But I'm stuck in these plain clothes different hours but the same flows
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Not enough hours

Postby BILI » Jan 25th, '10, 20:26

Lol I dig what you`re saying,and man it was dope as we expect from you,nice stuff :y: :y:
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Re: Not enough hours

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 25th, '10, 20:45

Thanks bro :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Not enough hours

Postby AOBrien09 » Jan 27th, '10, 01:47

I like this, flows on point multi's are good :y: an like what your saying in it can relate to a few lines aswell which is always a sign of a good writer :sweating: , like your stuff man :flower:
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Re: Not enough hours

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 27th, '10, 05:00

Thanks homie I been diggin your shit too man :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Not enough hours

Postby Arrinef » Jan 27th, '10, 05:30

dope man,
crazy energy and quick multies



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Re: Not enough hours

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 27th, '10, 05:31

Thanks bro :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Not enough hours

Postby Strictt Ame » Jan 27th, '10, 05:46

Sick drop..flow and multis were crazy, especially in 2nd verse..solid shit man
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Re: Not enough hours

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 27th, '10, 05:56

thanks alot Ame preciate it
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Not enough hours

Postby Strictt Ame » Jan 27th, '10, 05:59

Whats good with that collab sonny?
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Re: Not enough hours

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 27th, '10, 06:00

Oh shit my bad homie I'm write somethin right now :sweating:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Not enough hours

Postby Strictt Ame » Jan 27th, '10, 06:11

Aiight just PM it to me and I'll write mine tomorrow after work..
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Re: Not enough hours

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 27th, '10, 06:12

I got ya homie
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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