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kidnappin a hoe

Postby Edge » Jan 26th, '10, 22:16

Guns kill, blood spills, you don’t wanna find out
My butterfly knife is open, I rip your mind out
Slice and dice you like an apple, bones crackle
pop you like the top on Snapple, as ur trapped in shackles
Hit you with shrapnel, fuck you for sparking beef
Detonator is your ignition, so go and start ya jeep
My hearts the street, you don’t wanna test this commissioner
I kidnap ya bitch, lock her up, u get to missin her
But theres no hope, its just straight obliteration
Package her in a crate to third world nations
As your waitin for her to return your calls and text messages
But she aint answering, man, Its all just vexed presages
The foreboding signs are so evidently evident
Shes basically dead and eventually heaven sent
But theres evidence or her being sent down to hell
And you found her bloated body, drowned in a well
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: kidnappin a hoe

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 27th, '10, 17:45

I dig the line about the jeep shit was ill :worship:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: kidnappin a hoe

Postby Edge » Jan 27th, '10, 18:23

Yah-hah wrote:I dig the line about the jeep shit was ill :worship:


thanks my man... we need to colab again sometime
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: kidnappin a hoe

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 27th, '10, 19:55

Yeah for sure. im workin on two collabs right now ill hit you up in a day or two
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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