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Jump in with the devil

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 24th, '10, 20:24

Breakin ya glass jaw with a seraded hacksaw,
Drinkin up the antidote taken the last drop,
Makin it go fast watch brakin the glass box containing the rat box,
Oops I mean the rat trap fear it as it snaps back,
Everybody laughs at my snapped back like what kinda craps that,
What kinda shit is that screaming out that this is wack,
I'm rippin tracks, marked with track marks and I'm not givin back,
Livin rap from my room, stereo bumpin,
Giving him no credit after he clearly wrote somethin,
On my weary boat running, to what is unsure,
I'm screamin outloud as if I'm the only one heard,
I'm only one bird, the only eagle in the sky,
I'm so high lookin down at people when I fly,
Hanging from the steeple when I die,
Lethal when I rhyme words release from my loose breathe,
Bruised with a loose neck around where the noose sets,
My lucid breathe is only the first part of a crucial death,
Screaming out who's next I'm ready like every word I said is crazy,
Like I'll stick scissors in a pregnant lady and be-head her baby,
They said he's crazy with his straight jacket too tight,
I'm pullin the trigger without a 48 magnum in sight,
Wait that isnt right, I meant to say somethin different,
Throwin the devil into hell then I'm jumpin back in with him
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Jump in with the devil

Postby Edge » Jan 24th, '10, 21:45

good shit my man, good multis as usual and mad nice flow
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: Jump in with the devil

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 24th, '10, 21:48

Thanks homie
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Jump in with the devil

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 25th, '10, 06:16

Yeah just in one of those moods ya know
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Jump in with the devil

Postby gutawafang » Jan 25th, '10, 10:45

Bruised with a loose neck around where the noose sets,
My lucid breathe is only the first part of a crucial death, :worship: :worship: :worship:

Overall, dope. Nothing much to say. Good original multis man. :y:
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Re: Jump in with the devil

Postby Enimee » Jan 25th, '10, 12:59

yeah pretty fuckin sick drop yah :shifty: :flutter:
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Re: Jump in with the devil

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 25th, '10, 15:53

Thanks homies appreciate it
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Jump in with the devil

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 27th, '10, 05:59

Bumpin
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Jump in with the devil

Postby preest » Jan 27th, '10, 13:18

crazy bro, you had some mad rhymes in there, you should record this one dawg, its fucking crazy!! multies are nice too bro, lets hear more!! :y:
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Re: Jump in with the devil

Postby Spyder » Jan 28th, '10, 03:56

liking this piece bro, guess ima have to get use to your style :flutter: :laughing:
good shit

they dont know what they in fo :shifty:
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Re: Jump in with the devil

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 28th, '10, 19:52

Haha yeah Spy they just dont know. Thanks preest
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Jump in with the devil

Postby Ms. Lunaverse » Jan 29th, '10, 07:20

First lines are crazy! I like the ending too good job little wolf!!
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Re: Jump in with the devil

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 29th, '10, 19:57

Thanks ma
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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