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Re: I'm new here but I'll still kick some ass

Postby Emadyville » Jan 28th, '10, 16:22

When you rhyme comatose and overdose a month after releases a song using the same rhymes, maybe on a different forum this would work but this stan country lol, just some words of advice :y:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: I'm new here but I'll still kick some ass

Postby lazyhazycrazydavey » Jan 28th, '10, 16:23

never heard the song, or I wouldn't have used it...I don't need to steal flows
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Re: I'm new here but I'll still kick some ass

Postby Spyder » Jan 28th, '10, 20:46

lazyhazycrazydavey wrote:never heard the song, or I wouldn't have used it...I don't need to steal flows


well u didnt steal a flow, and you didnt exatcly bite lyrics at all
its just that Em used it in Music Box... which i know you have heard
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Re: I'm new here but I'll still kick some ass

Postby lazyhazycrazydavey » Jan 28th, '10, 20:57

actually I've only heard parts of relapse...haven't listened to music box tho...I'll check it out now...I don't own it, I'm a broke mother fucker...so what I've heard is what I found thru youtube... :smoking:
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Re: I'm new here but I'll still kick some ass

Postby lazyhazycrazydavey » Jan 28th, '10, 21:03

I guess I could see why he said I bit lyrics...but oh well, I really didn't
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Re: I'm new here but I'll still kick some ass

Postby Emadyville » Jan 28th, '10, 21:54

lazyhazycrazydavey wrote:I guess I could see why he said I bit lyrics...but oh well, I really didn't


I know you didn't, I was just saying, know what I mean homie :y:
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Re: I'm new here but I'll still kick some ass

Postby lazyhazycrazydavey » Jan 28th, '10, 22:24

Emadyville wrote:
lazyhazycrazydavey wrote:I guess I could see why he said I bit lyrics...but oh well, I really didn't


I know you didn't, I was just saying, know what I mean homie :y:




yeah... :b:
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Re: I'm new here but I'll still kick some ass

Postby Solace » Jan 28th, '10, 22:44

lazyhazycrazydavey wrote:you all talk big game...spit it...

Why don't you just look at previous posts then...

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Re: I'm new here but I'll still kick some ass

Postby lazyhazycrazydavey » Jan 28th, '10, 23:00

because I'd rather antagonize them until they throw somethin fresh down...
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Re: I'm new here but I'll still kick some ass

Postby Solace » Jan 28th, '10, 23:29

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Re: I'm new here but I'll still kick some ass

Postby Edge » Jan 29th, '10, 00:01

Coleon wrote:Dude you so gay, no way jose
I'm so day that I'm OJ
the no play with grown sray
yay I'm gonna play with Jay
I'm paid and you're not even a little bit you bitch, haha
my structure is sick like medical diseases, structure like Yah-Hah
all ya'll can't hang wit me
see I'm not playing G
trees, pees, and a couple pair of keys
suck on these

yeah...roasted :laughing:


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be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: I'm new here but I'll still kick some ass

Postby lazyhazycrazydavey » Jan 29th, '10, 00:16

to tell you all the truth I expected better
better find yourselves a better endevour
never the less, I'm relentless at best
ready to test n put all you dimented to rest
you rat bastards are crap rappers
I'm a rap master
blast badder
than the mad Hatter on smack
destroy more lives than crack shatters
been on a mission
to spit you trippin bitches
into oblivion
or at least beat you into submission
listen you think your shit glistens
but I don't wanna listen to this shit
Id rather spend the next 60 minutes in prison
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Re: I'm new here but I'll still kick some ass

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 29th, '10, 00:28

Coleon wrote:Dude you so gay, no way jose
I'm so day that I'm OJ
the no play with grown sray
yay I'm gonna play with Jay
I'm paid and you're not even a little bit you bitch, haha
my structure is sick like medical diseases, structure like Yah-Hah
all ya'll can't hang wit me
see I'm not playing G
trees, pees, and a couple pair of keys
suck on these

yeah...roasted :laughing:


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Re: I'm new here but I'll still kick some ass

Postby lazyhazycrazydavey » Jan 29th, '10, 00:41

oh shit this ain't go fish
I'm spreadin oceans like Moses
you're more bitch
than your ho is
absorbin my shit
like you learn thru osmosis
a couple more doses
n I'll have doubled over so quick
you'll think you have cerosis
moanin, n groanin
pukin n jonesin
for the new kid who owns it
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Re: I'm new here but I'll still kick some ass

Postby Edge » Jan 29th, '10, 01:13

lazyhazycrazydavey wrote:oh shit this ain't go fish
I'm spreadin oceans like Moses
you're more bitch
than your ho is
absorbin my shit
like you learn thru osmosis
a couple more doses
n I'll have doubled over so quick
you'll think you have cerosis
moanin, n groanin
pukin n jonesin
for the new kid who owns it


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