I'm new here but I'll still kick some ass

[lazyhazycrazydavey]

oh shit this ain't go fish
I'm spreadin oceans like Moses
you're more bitch
than your ho is
absorbin my shit
like you learn thru osmosis
a couple more doses
n I'll have doubled over so quick
you'll think you have cerosis
moanin, n groanin
pukin n jonesin
for the new kid who owns it

just give it up...

why? I'm having fun

[Edge]

oh shit this ain't go fish
I'm spreadin oceans like Moses
you're more bitch
than your ho is
absorbin my shit
like you learn thru osmosis
a couple more doses
n I'll have doubled over so quick
you'll think you have cerosis
moanin, n groanin
pukin n jonesin
for the new kid who owns it

just give it up...

why? I'm having fun

u have fun getting shit on?

[lazyhazycrazydavey]

shit on?? shit ur just jealous I took some of your boyfriends time so he could write a few lines...I'll admit that last wasnt my best...but I ain't seen shit from you yet, so I could care less about your opinion...

[Edge]

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=78057

well now u could see that cock sucker... and i drop on average a verse a day in the CW section... so if u dont see me, than ur either blind or just purely stupid

[Element.]

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=78057

well now u could see that cock sucker... and i drop on average a verse a day in the CW section... so if u dont see me, than ur either blind or just purely stupid

Yeah the only way he will leave is out of deprestion

[Arrinef]

crazey davey,

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=77243

take note of the real talent

[2sDay]

crazydavey is as bad as bulletboy was.....

[Element.]

word, but bulletboy stole lyrics.

[B.A.D.]

I like it man... fix your structure tho, cuz it "looks" bad shaped, tho I tried flowing to them and it doesnt sounds bad at all... you have the idea.
since its a cocky type ketystyle drop... try to play a little bit more with the rhymes, add a methaphor here and there and use some nameplay...
finally just try to adjust it into an easier structure

can be better... just keep it up

[Tranquil]

a-yo it wasnt bad man, keep practicing and you will be fire

[lazyhazycrazydavey]

I like it man... fix your structure tho, cuz it "looks" bad shaped, tho I tried flowing to them and it doesnt sounds bad at all... you have the idea.
since its a cocky type ketystyle drop... try to play a little bit more with the rhymes, add a methaphor here and there and use some nameplay...
finally just try to adjust it into an easier structure

can be better... just keep it up

finally someone on this site who knows what they are talking about...thanx yo

[Edge]

word, but bulletboy stole lyrics.

what ever happened to him?

[2sDay]

word, but bulletboy stole lyrics.

what ever happened to him?

he left

[classthe_king]

2sday is bullet boy

[2sDay]

2sday is bullet boy

oh no.....
don't tell me Ima have to deal with this