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fuck crazy dave again

Postby Edge » Jan 29th, '10, 02:14

I would’ve never said shit, if he wasn’t so cocky
Well im Apollo Creed, and you aint even Rocky
Im to fast in this race, aint no need to clock me
Ya lyrics don’t shock me, ya insults don’t mock me
In fact, you should give me props for saying ‘Crazy Dave’
Saying youl part the ocean like Moses, well im a tidal wave
If round one wasn’t enough for ya, here I go with round two
Now your getting nervous, because I already clowned you
Verbally drowned you, no friends to surround you, your lonely
your cheep punch lines and bad structure are your only homies
You don’t know me, do best not to get speaking on my name
Cause I got a Gatling gun that’l be leaking out ya brains
Look man, I don’t wanna go and have to do it to ya
So have fun with suicide, do it with my German Luger
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: fuck crazy dave again

Postby Spyder » Jan 29th, '10, 02:18

same as before :smoking:
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Re: fuck crazy dave again

Postby gutawafang » Jan 29th, '10, 02:28

Nice nameplay. I mean, punchlines. :y:
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Re: fuck crazy dave again

Postby lazyhazycrazydavey » Jan 29th, '10, 02:46

I didn't say shit to you bitch but you had to open your mouth
ain't interested in your opinion but you know it's on now
why you gotta be baggin on clowns
when you're the biggest two face faggot around
friendly advice...ppffft...let me lend you some 'dice'
then you can shoot some real 'crap' before you end it tonite
me commit suicide, that's like you gettin a life
I'd rather drown you while you're checkin the tide
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Re: fuck crazy dave again

Postby Spyder » Jan 29th, '10, 02:53

make a new thread to respond to him :coffee:
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Re: fuck crazy dave again

Postby lazyhazycrazydavey » Jan 29th, '10, 03:02

Spyder wrote:make a new thread to respond to him :coffee:



hey Spyder, why?? I mean this is just the same as him calling me out right...? just wondering, not trying to be offensive...:smoking:
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Re: fuck crazy dave again

Postby Solace » Jan 29th, '10, 03:08

Because the replies are meant to be feedback, an entire new diss should be in another topic.
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Re: fuck crazy dave again

Postby lazyhazycrazydavey » Jan 29th, '10, 03:12

Solace wrote:Because the replies are meant to be feedback, an entire new diss should be in another topic.



but this is a diss topic about me, my natural feedback is a return diss...I'm really not trying to be disrespectful, I just don't understand why I have to start a new topic to reply to his diss...it's just not makin sense to me... :whistle:
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Re: fuck crazy dave again

Postby gutawafang » Jan 29th, '10, 03:13

lazyhazycrazydavey wrote:
Solace wrote:Because the replies are meant to be feedback, an entire new diss should be in another topic.



but this is a diss topic about me, my natural feedback is a return diss...I'm really not trying to be disrespectful, I just don't understand why I have to start a new topic to reply to his diss...it's just not makin sense to me... :whistle:

Cuz if you make a new thread, people would read.
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Re: fuck crazy dave again

Postby lazyhazycrazydavey » Jan 29th, '10, 03:17

gutawafang wrote:
lazyhazycrazydavey wrote:
Solace wrote:Because the replies are meant to be feedback, an entire new diss should be in another topic.



but this is a diss topic about me, my natural feedback is a return diss...I'm really not trying to be disrespectful, I just don't understand why I have to start a new topic to reply to his diss...it's just not makin sense to me... :whistle:

Cuz if you make a new thread, people would read.




:wave:
you're reading it...
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Re: fuck crazy dave again

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 29th, '10, 03:18

keep dissing and battles to rap battles section :y:
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Re: fuck crazy dave again

Postby gutawafang » Jan 29th, '10, 03:18

I only took a glance. LOL. I mean, if you make a new thread, people would consider it a respond thread. But what you're doing now is a respond post, which has less impact and it makes the thread messy. Like, SPAM. You dig?
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Re: fuck crazy dave again

Postby lazyhazycrazydavey » Jan 29th, '10, 03:22

I can respect that...see you made it make sense to me...thank you :y:
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Re: fuck crazy dave again

Postby gutawafang » Jan 29th, '10, 03:23

lazyhazycrazydavey wrote:I can respect that...see you made it make sense to me...thank you :y:

no problem man. Let's follow the rules. :flower:
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Re: fuck crazy dave again

Postby Spyder » Jan 29th, '10, 04:18

what solace said

needs seperate feed, this topic gets spammed

Bar said keep battling to the battle section

HOWEVER do not take shit from here and put it into that section.
call him out make new shit :shakehead:

though disses do go here :y:
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