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Tomahawks and brass knuckles W/ Strictt Ame

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 30th, '10, 00:22

Yah-hah
Watch out motherfuckers, its Yah-hah and Strictt Ame,
All these other cats talking blah blah and big game
They can catch the quick 9 bullets laced with strictnine
These cats face 6 times my clip lines erase they 6 lives,
Trip, why? I'm running through your land like 'Fuck I'ma get mine'
I lift my heat, you grip the seat blast you like my stereo,
Enemies, let the semi squeeze walking past you like my weary foes,
You can't hear me though, my text was enough to give you a head rush,
You bled plus my Red chucks'll kick you till the lead stuck,
I said hush, It's my turn to sledgehammer ya fuckin jaw off,
Grippin, trippin with the sawed off till both ya arms fall off,
Rippin the walls off, I'm killin all the docs off with a weak stomach,
Running out the mental ward without a proper release from it,
I'm armed with the payload to start harmin the main road,
Startin the game slow I'm archin the blade though,
I'm carvin the paved road part of the same show,
The art of my pained flows well lets start with the plain clothes,
I'm markin my aim so pardon my halo,
Startin the chain slow, shootin so many bullets I hit ya guardian angel

Strictt Ame
Listen up you rookies gettin fucked - you heard Yah NOW ME
Don’t give a damn your fly, I’ll shoot at the sky til the CLOUDS BLEED
I hear faggot emcees claimin their ill - I just LAUGH, CHUCKLE
Cuz one punch would take the belt and leave ya ASS BUCKLED
Ame got that one hitter quitter, bitch Im PAST SCUFFLES
And fuck ya gun, once it jams ya meetin my BRASS KNUCKLES
AFTER THIS SEGMENT you’ll be SPLATTERED IN SECTIONS
Until cops come N find you in SCATTERED DIRECTIONS
Venomous flows Im tremendous with those - RABID, IM WRECKIN
And every verse I drop is a felony - its BAD FOR YA RECORD
Sucker emcees don’t got an answer for the ILLNESS I HARBOR
I was rippin cyphers when kids were still KILLED FOR THEIR STARTERS
Against me you stand no chance - your 16s are NUTHIN N LETS SAY
You could be Mexican and you still wouldn’t be FUCKIN WITH S.A.
Think Im stressing your disses? Its more like TOLERABLE TENSION
Im easily top 5 - not even Judges give you an HONORABLE MENTION
We KNOW YA LYING, all you phonies got a career that SLOWLY DYING
So when I shoot, you’ll get buried in a Lake er Basket, KOBE BRYANT
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Tomahawks and brass knuckles W/ Strictt Ame

Postby Strictt Ame » Jan 30th, '10, 23:26

Wow..didnt think this would get slept on
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Re: Tomahawks and brass knuckles W/ Strictt Ame

Postby classthe_king » Jan 31st, '10, 00:15

Hot collab :worship: Yah-hah your multis were insane.
I'm armed with the payload to start harmin the main road,
Startin the game slow I'm archin the blade though,
I'm carvin the paved road part of the same show,
The art of my pained flows well lets start with the plain clothes,
I'm markin my aim so pardon my halo,
Startin the chain slow, shootin so many bullets I hit ya guardian angel
^^^^^^^^^^That whole part was nuts.

Strict your punches and wordplay were great.
And every verse I drop is a felony - its BAD FOR YA RECORD
Loved that line.

You both deffinately brought it.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Tomahawks and brass knuckles W/ Strictt Ame

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 31st, '10, 06:51

Yeah I know wats up with that??
Yo thanks class, finally get some good from you lol
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Tomahawks and brass knuckles W/ Strictt Ame

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 31st, '10, 19:42

Damn Yall both killed it....love this piece and the rhyme scheme is great...rhyme scheme in my book is third after Multis and Vocab, ya dig...ima have to collab with this Strictt Ame fellow
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Re: Tomahawks and brass knuckles W/ Strictt Ame

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 31st, '10, 19:47

Yeah he;s ill. thanks for checkin
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Tomahawks and brass knuckles W/ Strictt Ame

Postby Strictt Ame » Feb 1st, '10, 05:48

Just PM me Fa-Q and we'll figure somethin out..thanks for the feed
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Re: Tomahawks and brass knuckles W/ Strictt Ame

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 2nd, '10, 06:54

Damn 2 people, this shit is ill
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Tomahawks and brass knuckles W/ Strictt Ame

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 2nd, '10, 07:09

Jus your multis are threatening
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Re: Tomahawks and brass knuckles W/ Strictt Ame

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 2nd, '10, 07:12

Like I been noticing that, I dont know why like I'm nice in real life, I start rappin im in that football/fighting mentality
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Tomahawks and brass knuckles W/ Strictt Ame

Postby Edge » Feb 5th, '10, 01:20

Yah-hah wrote:Like I been noticing that, I dont know why like I'm nice in real life, I start rappin im in that football/fighting mentality


i get like that too... im a nice guy til i get in rap mode, than i just wanna fuck shit up lol
now back to the song, it was mad nice... good multis from both of u... i think yah-hah went a little harder, however my favorite bar by far is

Against me you stand no chance - your 16s are NUTHIN N LETS SAY
You could be Mexican and you still wouldn’t be FUCKIN WITH S.A.

i love that lol

good shit guys
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: Tomahawks and brass knuckles W/ Strictt Ame

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 5th, '10, 08:00

Thanks Edge, definitely one of my better 16s for sure.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Tomahawks and brass knuckles W/ Strictt Ame

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 14th, '10, 11:41

Damn I'm re-readin this and this thing is fire lol
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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