Smithy Vs lazyhazycrazydavey (VOTE NOW)

[Element.]

Sorry i didnt make sooner drop as soon as you can
Ive got to say this is not one of my best that ive done but i stoped battleing for abit and probs forgot a few things which is why im coming backin but slowly.



bit of the to much chatter, kick ass before ya lines just splatter
commit make shit dreams just shatter, walk away nothing will ever matter

"Relentless at best"?, gonna let loose and get dispossessed
just like "everyone" guessed, long but short ended quest

just battlein' everywhere if not "accepted" or even expected
cuss that'll just kill air cant strip shit bair as you cant be protected

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Line 1: in his "I'm new here but I'll still kick some ass" thread thinkin he
is really good.
Line 2: basicly sayin' he is bad and his dreams just shatter
Line 3: sayin he wont give in, in one of his rhymes
Line 5: sometimes just does random rhymes in posts.

[lazyhazycrazydavey]

to battle a Smith in a battle of whits feels kinda 'funny'(I'm a Smith too)
I ain't a 'comedian' so that means that you must be a 'dummy'
I'll 'seal my lips', you're feelin it, 'my hand in your tummy'
I'm the 'vantriliquist' with the 'ill'est shit make your ass feel like a 'drugie'
fuckin crummy, n slummy, have you lookin like 'Shattner'
ain't much of a rapper so this rat bastard must be an 'actor'

[Element.]

Nice mate

Everyone vote.
and brake it down

[classthe_king]

and brake it down

[Element.]

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[2sDay]

(3) Punchlines- Smithy
(3) Personals- Smithy
(2) Multies- Smithy
(1) Flow- Tie
(1) Structure- Crazy
(1) Vocab/Complex- Tie
(1) Other- Crazy(Wordplay)

10-4 Smithy......

[2sDay]

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u spelled it wrong

[Element.]

Thanks,
1-0

[Element.]

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u spelled it wrong

damn i allways do that ! break it down

[lazyhazycrazydavey]

(3) Punchlines- Smithy
(3) Personals- Smithy
(2) Multies- Smithy
(1) Flow- Tie
(1) Structure- Crazy
(1) Vocab/Complex- Tie
(1) Other- Crazy(Wordplay)

10-4 Smithy......

bullshit you biased prick...I murdered him...he barely had multies...i don't see any real punchlines...I'd definately give him personals, but you're just lying now
no offense Smithy...you done iight...

[2sDay]

(3) Punchlines- Smithy
(3) Personals- Smithy
(2) Multies- Smithy
(1) Flow- Tie
(1) Structure- Crazy
(1) Vocab/Complex- Tie
(1) Other- Crazy(Wordplay)

10-4 Smithy......

bullshit you biased prick...I murdered him...he barely had multies...i don't see and real punchlines...I'd definately give him personals, but you're just lying now...

i saw what i saw asshole....it's all based on opinion(except multis in whch he clearly beat you).....
Now, i hope you lose(which u will)

[lazyhazycrazydavey]

(3) Punchlines- Smithy
(3) Personals- Smithy
(2) Multies- Smithy
(1) Flow- Tie
(1) Structure- Crazy
(1) Vocab/Complex- Tie
(1) Other- Crazy(Wordplay)

10-4 Smithy......

bullshit you biased prick...I murdered him...he barely had multies...i don't see and real punchlines...I'd definately give him personals, but you're just lying now...

i saw what i saw asshole....it's all based on opinion(except multis in whch he clearly beat you).....
Now, i hope you lose(which u will)

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it's alright, at least now I know you're just a liar...

[2sDay]

it's okay at least i know u suck dick

[Strictt Ame]

(3) Punchlines- Tie (each had one weak one)
(3) Personals- Smithy
(2) Multies- Smithy
(1) Flow- Tie
(1) Structure- Davey
(1) Vocab/Complex- Smithy
(1) Other- Davey(one attempt at a metaphor)

10-6 Smithy

Davey, your shit was basic, simple rhymes and your wordplay/metaphors/similies are all off..you have some decent concepts but you just dont deliver them very well..

Smithy, you did just a tad better than Davey..some of your personals were real weak like the explination hits harder than the punch..your multis need work..but you had enough here to beat davey..

Vote = Smithy

[Element.]

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Thanks and yeh i know i had some weak shit there with the punches

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1 more and its KO

@Lazyhazycrazy
Dont just all of a sudden expect to win you have not long started rappin mayb some other time when you focus on the main things in the battle like multi's and personals and hits ect.
i know my multi's are not great and thats what im workin on.
and thanks for the "No offence"