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420 pt.2 1st poem

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420 pt.2 1st poem

Postby Just Silver » Jan 31st, '10, 21:09

first poem i have ever done while i was :smoking: on that ;)
wasnt in a rapping mood

High as I cannot be so
Forever Heights till forever more
so numb dull and vibrant
hypocritical silence

store warmth with death
anything happens
unraveled mysteries of prime
poems without rapping

Thus a king must be a gem
for one is a peasant
for rising suns serve purpose
of being high as the heaven

see once dro and much kush
lighted with intents of space
memory soul blankets
a sudden end of trace

so feel once more oh just once
because its right around the corner
through feeble use yet few adjust
through mental cutting borders
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Re: 420 pt.2 1st poem

Postby Just Silver » Feb 1st, '10, 21:20

bumpp :whistle:
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Re: 420 pt.2 1st poem

Postby DƎRDYPK » Feb 1st, '10, 21:25

I think your rappings better but......something new never hurts ;)
this was pretty dope though...I'll smoke to that :y: :staticsmoking:
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Re: 420 pt.2 1st poem

Postby mcZu » Feb 1st, '10, 21:30

I like it, mysterious yet to the point.
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Re: 420 pt.2 1st poem

Postby Solace » Feb 5th, '10, 18:41

mcZu wrote:I like it, mysterious yet to the point.

Exactly that. Nice dude.
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