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quick 6 line keystyle, feed appreciated.

Postby Low Key » Jan 31st, '10, 22:24

my devotion is the key to my lyrics, the evidence of my eloquence
surfaces with perfect relevance, mixed in with my benevolence
i get the surge of an elephant, when i merge my intelligence
with my physical presence it reveals the line between hell - heaven.
immaculate battlers challenge me but i send do-gooders into racism
erasing them off the map with my gat's and these cat's know i'm wasting 'em
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Re: quick 6 line keystyle, feed appreciated.

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 31st, '10, 22:27

Shit not bad man...I haven't peeped all your shit but I like what I see
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