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Re: Coleon - Sparring

Postby Spyder » Feb 1st, '10, 02:00

pretty good drop, thought the punches were good, not great but deff good
nice little spit there.
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Re: Coleon - Sparring

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 1st, '10, 02:03

Wow nice drop Co....love that olive garden line...that shit had me rollin
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Re: Coleon - Sparring

Postby Spyder » Feb 1st, '10, 02:04

Coleon wrote:
Spyder wrote:pretty good drop, thought the punches were good, not great but deff good
nice little spit there.


lines I found in my science notes from last semester lol


word, i love it when u find old shit and like it :D
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Re: Coleon - Sparring

Postby DƎRDYPK » Feb 1st, '10, 02:10

that was dope bro :y:
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Re: Coleon - Sparring

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 1st, '10, 07:45

Nice little drop
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Coleon - Sparring

Postby BabyBLue91 » Feb 1st, '10, 07:50

Coleon wrote:All this time I been rappin’ for now, I’ve kept workin’
Turn a writer’s block to Jenga towers and shred verses
Death is certain, live life as a sentence and no pardon


Love that part cole :y:
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Re: Coleon - Sparring

Postby Relapse.LP » Feb 1st, '10, 08:36

Sick to see Cole dropping again. And what was more sick was the verse. :y:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/

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Re: Coleon - Sparring

Postby Spyder » Feb 1st, '10, 20:22

oh LP u and your comments :laughing:
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Re: Coleon - Sparring

Postby Solace » Feb 1st, '10, 23:20

Real tight man, lol@the OG punch nice stuff
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