The Ending To My Story

[Solace]

I'm not sure if I posted this before. It's a couple months old but I've searched back and haven't found if I've posted it before so, here:

[Verse 1]
Everytime he turned around he practically turned to frown,
His pain he wished to turn it down, burning like a furnace now,
Happiness foggy, and he can't escape the current clouds,
Turned to clown, anger embodied wanting to burn his town,
Forever he's stuck, try recounting though the memories tough,
And every letter he must sign so his name remember she does,
Missing her feathering touch, willing to do whatever he must,
He'll try, give up, try again though he knows he'll never be loved,
He was never good at acting, nor ever good at matching,
Opened the door to his heart, and it led him somewhere bad see,
Reacting madly, some of seven sins that drove his engine,
He would try to make her notice him but she paid no attention,
He stopped writing, depressants had became his medicine,
Would knock on her door but there was no way of getting in,
It was a hit and miss, and now knowing there was no chance,
He sits in his room all day writing about his failed romance.

[Chorus]
And just being happy is forever in my dreams,
Sleeping, 'cause I wake to enemies and fiends,
I flick off lights at night, sleep away the pain,
This fight I tried, but I can't ease away the name.

[Verse 2]
Isn't a piece with peace, it's a story filled with grief and misery,
Were a bitch to me, you could've treated me like shit at least,
Uneven symmetry, false truths were all you, hate love, same stuff,
I hate the painted touch, I'll stop 'cause I've faked enough,
Don't know how much you mean to me, you made dreaming ease,
Took a piece of me, beaten and now I'm believed to be deceased,
My heart, how do I free it up, a fiend for love, I'll never be enough,
Soft spot exposed, rotting slow, not something we've dicussed,
A monster it's apparent I've turned into something of my father,
'Cause I gave up quick, obsessed, and never really bothered,
I would always see her, yet I fled and never found the courage,
Easier said than done, kept feelings flowing around the currents,
And now it's hurting, but I'm not here just to sit, piss and moan,
Then start whining about how my lone soul is rich with holes,
The story it's been told, I dismissed it, this is it, a real written fold,
Dealt with these cards long enough, now I feel this mission's old.

[Chorus]
And just being happy is forever in my dreams,
Sleeping, 'cause I wake to enemies and fiends,
I flick off lights at night, sleep away the pain,
This fight I tried, but I can't ease away the name.

[Solace]

Thank you all.

[Emadyville]

I really liked it, I thought the first verse was much better than the second, more because for some reason the flow seemed to be off on the second, which is prolly just me

But also the first verse seemed stronger for this concept, the ending just kinda was alright, I did really like that "uneven symmetry" part though, that just stood out.

Overall this was a good read though and a cool "tale" if you will

[Solace]

Thanks bro.