classthe_king vs. lazyhazycrazydavey(VOTE NOW)

[lazyhazycrazydavey]

class the king this ain't a monarchy, it's anarchy
assault n battery, enough ammo to cause catastrophy
ur fantasies of jackin me are just exactly that you see
blastin back at me will have me splatter your anatomy
have you mad at me, I'm a lion of a writer
take you from sire to town crier, like a 5 iron to Tiger
your situations dire, it's really time to face the facts
wish you weren't sayin that but it's too late to take it back


not my best, I really ain't feelin it today...

[classthe_king]

Just got home from basketball, ill eat then right mine

[classthe_king]

I wrote this real quick, didn't perfect rhymes or structure but w/e


A picture is worth a thousand words? I think not
He could drop a million now and would only be an ink blot
Everything i brings hot, on tracks theres not doubt i rip
I'll tear your heart from your chest n you still aint cut out for this
I pounce n diss, nobody is safe in this place yo
I'm takin out davey once and for all, call me sugar ramos*
I won't blame those in the way, this is over right now
You wouldn't come out on top if your mom birthed you upside down

*Sugar ramos was a boxer who killed Davey Moore in the ring

[lazyhazycrazydavey]

"I'm takin out davey once and for all, call me sugar ramos*"
nice line...

[classthe_king]

thanks, VOTE FUCKS I ALWAYS VOTE FOR YOUR SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Strictt Ame]

(3) Punchlines: Class
(3) Personals: Class
(2) Multies: Tie
(1) Flow: Class
(1) Structure: Davey
(1) Vocab/Complex: Class
(1) Other: Class (Sugar Ramos line)

12-2 for Class, Davey this was better than your other stuff but Class just out powered you here, some catagroies were close but Class got you


Vote = Class

[Spyder]

3 Punches - Class
3 Personals - None
2 Multies - Lazy
1 Flow - Class
1 Structure - Tie
1 Vocab/Complex - Lazy
1 Other - Class(im a fan of wordplay punches )

5-3

Class you need to work personals in there bro, then u can get both 3 catagories
i realize you cant make the same punches. but gotta learn to make em TO the guy

Lazy gettin better, your rhyming was kinda wierd in this(rhyming in the middle)
but gotta get personals in there too

[classthe_king]

word up, 2-0

[classthe_king]

3-0
Thanks for the battle