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Chunky Bars pt.2

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Chunky Bars pt.2

Postby Just Silver » Feb 2nd, '10, 02:58

Im Anti-Virus Pro-Pain modern original flow play
magic and mystical ,show vain, habits and get at your forts gates
break it down not a wince at all ,take a crown make a pound, i invinciball
prince of yall, little woes and brittle foes, cause to me a palace is a studio
claim of integrity, integrate calamity, with the insanity, to handle beats
like its a jog or walk "cough" and talk, i can cause i can "drop"
fog or dark ,i lighten the enlightened, spike a fucking mic, with lyrical vicodin
spearing him right again, until the night is thin ,i get baked put the spices in,
my likeliness, of writing shit, psyche wits ,will tear apart, fearless hearts
and thats not the weirdest part see peering charts is what makes me king
shooting random shots ,no safety thing, or whatever you call it
no falling for nonsense, so upon the sconces, i see the dark life, i live apart with
smoke trees bark-less, bitch im barker in a black parker im always " write"
live for the black marker permanent starker word partner never misses but slurs often.
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Re: Chunky Bars pt.2

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 2nd, '10, 06:38

Good shit bro, I liked the vocab in this one, really cool :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Chunky Bars pt.2

Postby Just Silver » Feb 2nd, '10, 20:33

Yah-hah wrote:Good shit bro, I liked the vocab in this one, really cool :y:

thanks for the feed :D
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