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Shook Ones

Postby Strictt Ame » Feb 3rd, '10, 02:42

2 open callouts, 33 views, no replies..

Yall some cowards, bitches..all around hoes
No punches, metas..just crawl around flows
That shit is so old, get it a cane or wheelchair
Cmon faggots, step up face Ame or be scared
I’ll still be there to throw disses in the face..
..Of any pussy talkin shit thinkin that hes great
Cats say they spittin truth..but no they lie
They’re afraid of me..2 calls with NO REPLIES
Don’t want it with me, just frontin they schemes
I see where they act tough in their piece
But wont battle..take their tail, tuck it n leave
Which goes to show they aint fuckin with me
Cmon you wusses..one punch, hit the guy
Spit ya rhyme..but ya know that shit wont fly
You just view the thread then whistle by
Cuz your weak ass is too shook to click, reply

Hopefully this will spark somebody to accept..
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Re: Shook Ones

Postby Spyder » Feb 3rd, '10, 03:07

not really feeling this one...

just my opinion
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Re: Shook Ones

Postby Just Silver » Feb 3rd, '10, 03:09

Spyder wrote:not really feeling this one...

just my opinion

more of the point is him trying to call us out

i know im not going to battle i never have

not a punch kind of guy
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Re: Shook Ones

Postby Spyder » Feb 3rd, '10, 03:11

Just Silver wrote:
Spyder wrote:not really feeling this one...

just my opinion

more of the point is him trying to call us out

i know im not going to battle i never have

not a punch kind of guy


thanks for pointing that out :roll:
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Re: Shook Ones

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 3rd, '10, 03:15

Callout for battle or collab? And when we gon' collab man?
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Re: Shook Ones

Postby Just Silver » Feb 3rd, '10, 03:16

Spyder wrote:
Just Silver wrote:
Spyder wrote:not really feeling this one...

just my opinion

more of the point is him trying to call us out

i know im not going to battle i never have

not a punch kind of guy


thanks for pointing that out :roll:

no problem ;) lol
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Re: Shook Ones

Postby Strictt Ame » Feb 3rd, '10, 04:49

Fa-Q wrote:Callout for battle or collab? And when we gon' collab man?

Whenever..just PM me a verse or a verse and hook and I'll lay my shit down
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