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Step to the Edge (chorus added)

Postby Edge » Feb 4th, '10, 23:45

What the fuck you doing? it’s the age of the Edge
So if you fuck around than its blades in ya heads
Play around the edge and your gunna get dangled
Play around with Edge and your gunna get strangled
My attitude since birth has been “fuck you pay me”
You aint got the guts to slay me, I obstruct u daily
And when im smoking on some THC crystal shit
You don’t want the missiles spit, pray for the pistol whip
Cause if I let the lead sprung, you will get ya head hung
I don’t like to fuck around, in the club sippin red rum
And when it comes down to it, u livin is my decision
every time I bust my gun, I do it with much precision
So you should beware and run home and be scared
Cause its over for you if I pull out my three squared
that’s what you get for thinking that your shit was big
So keep fuckin with the Edge and I’ll split ya wig

why does everybody, instigate the Edge
i will slice my knife, from vertibrates to heads
everyone just thinks, i will hide and grovel
come visit the edge, get inside this novel
i will take you all, on a journey unadventured
if you come along, make sure an atourneys tenured
because the shit you see, will scar for life
lock you in a chair, feather and tar ya wife
step to the Edge
Last edited by Edge on Feb 8th, '10, 06:38, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: heres a verse for ya

Postby Strictt Ame » Feb 5th, '10, 00:11

I get where you comin from, I have 2 callouts without reply and my last 2 collabs with Yah-hah and Fa-Q are gettin slept on..


This was good, rhyme scheme and flow were pretty sick..

Play around the edge and your gunna get dangled
Play around with Edge and your gunna get strangled
My attitude since birth has been “fuck you pay me”
You aint got the guts to slay me, I obstruct u daily
And when im smoking on some THC crystal shit
You don’t want the missiles spit, pray for the pistol whip
^^that was some dope stuff, good double pun off your name..
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Re: heres a verse for ya

Postby Edge » Feb 5th, '10, 00:51

Strictt Ame wrote:I get where you comin from, I have 2 callouts without reply and my last 2 collabs with Yah-hah and Fa-Q are gettin slept on..


This was good, rhyme scheme and flow were pretty sick..

Play around the edge and your gunna get dangled
Play around with Edge and your gunna get strangled
My attitude since birth has been “fuck you pay me”
You aint got the guts to slay me, I obstruct u daily
And when im smoking on some THC crystal shit
You don’t want the missiles spit, pray for the pistol whip
^^that was some dope stuff, good double pun off your name..


thanks for the feed man... im not really into battles but il def check out ya colabs with yah-hah and fa-q
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Re: heres a verse for ya

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 5th, '10, 10:05

Yo Edge I think I know why you been gettin slept on, I see it with alot of ither cats, Dont just do a verse and post it like every day cause people just see the sa,e old thing ya know. Save that shit and bang out some songs and shit ya know. Always down with ya man good shit wanna see more bangers :y:
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Re: heres a verse for ya

Postby gutawafang » Feb 5th, '10, 10:07

Yah-hah wrote:Yo Edge I think I know why you been gettin slept on, I see it with alot of ither cats, Dont just do a verse and post it like every day cause people just see the sa,e old thing ya know. Save that shit and bang out some songs and shit ya know. Always down with ya man good shit wanna see more bangers :y:

I'm with Yahah here. Edge, you're dope. Do complete songs man. ;)

At least provide titles. :D
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Re: heres a verse for ya

Postby Solace » Feb 5th, '10, 18:44

Word@Yah and Fish. Name them, and put some together. Full pieces are the shit (I don't know why I stopped doing them...I'm a lazy fuck I guess)

But uh yeah this was pretty nice. You gone a long way from when I told you you sucked dick. :flutter:
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Re: heres a verse for ya

Postby Edge » Feb 5th, '10, 20:25

alright, thanks guys.... i actually made a song recently and that got slept on too lol but il start just droppin songs

Solace wrote:Word@Yah and Fish. Name them, and put some together. Full pieces are the shit (I don't know why I stopped doing them...I'm a lazy fuck I guess)

But uh yeah this was pretty nice. You gone a long way from when I told you you sucked dick. :flutter:


lmao thanks
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Re: Step to the Edge (chorus added)

Postby Edge » Feb 8th, '10, 06:39

added a chorus :D
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Re: Step to the Edge (chorus added)

Postby gutawafang » Feb 8th, '10, 06:59

Man, I feel the chorus. :worship: Awesome man! :worship:
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Re: Step to the Edge (chorus added)

Postby Edge » Feb 8th, '10, 07:57

gutawafang wrote:Man, I feel the chorus. :worship: Awesome man! :worship:


thanks man, i might add two more verses and record it over my phone since thts all i got, but i wanna see if everyone thinks my flows good and if so imma get a cheap mic
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Re: Step to the Edge (chorus added)

Postby gutawafang » Feb 8th, '10, 07:59

Edge wrote:
gutawafang wrote:Man, I feel the chorus. :worship: Awesome man! :worship:


thanks man, i might add two more verses and record it over my phone since thts all i got, but i wanna see if everyone thinks my flows good and if so imma get a cheap mic

Yeah man. I will check it out. ;)
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