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Women to Jafar

Postby Just Silver » Feb 5th, '10, 02:30

I stay alone type an amazing poem
you know im mobbing i have the "A. Cap-one"
if you figure thats agitating i meant "exclamation"
im next to animation im way out of line
machinations mechanical optimus prime
dropping a dime but not talking to the cops
im talking about dropping the bitch on a cock
before i have to leave and punch the clock
deemed too hot for Fahrenheit description
hey guy just listen my cum was her prescription
swallowing embryos in every hole
damn that bitch should be a cemetery yo
but funny how it went from clubs to pent
and how she used to sell drugs for rent
i have sick sense of humor
sixth sense of rumors that pick dead tulips
gardeners are doctors they cant examine
the way a mind works through 6 years of marriage
already wanting a new piece of pie
sick of it i swear a few need to die
like wise they like guys with a Rolex
the woman so hot she cause four wrecks
and many twisted necks
and many wasted checks for a little blatant sex
really its a mess a want to take a heli tour
shove her off and say land your belly whore
watch her as she hits the surface
not at all nervous her life never had a purpose
until some propose hating golden hoes
so im silver froze till i end up ripping clothes
and run out of my house half dressed
getting screamed at by a prostitute with an accent
flossing roots from past tense or whatever the past is
Americas assets with a craziness average
of every female ratio a hundred
hating the whole abundance
except their holes and fun tits
and homos dont get me started
throw you out of a sex toy market
and beat you with aladdins magic carpet
thats right disneys my next target
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Re: Women to Jafar

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 5th, '10, 08:08

:worship: :worship: Is that first punch like A cap on as in an oklands a's hat on or something? JW but it was fire, been gettin slept on like crazy man you gettin this good shit out :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Women to Jafar

Postby gutawafang » Feb 5th, '10, 08:11

I see dope lines. :toocool:

It's dope man! :worship:
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Re: Women to Jafar

Postby Just Silver » Feb 5th, '10, 23:43

Yah-hah wrote::worship: :worship: Is that first punch like A cap on as in an oklands a's hat on or something? JW but it was fire, been gettin slept on like crazy man you gettin this good shit out :y:

A cap-one meant Al capone as well as me having the A cap on "one" so i made "exclamation"
and thanks for the good feed :flower:
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Re: Women to Jafar

Postby Strictt Ame » Feb 6th, '10, 02:55

Some real nice metas in there..A Cap one was a bit of a stretch but the concept was ill..

dope drop man, keep em comin
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Re: Women to Jafar

Postby Just Silver » Feb 6th, '10, 02:59

Strictt Ame wrote:Some real nice metas in there..A Cap one was a bit of a stretch but the concept was ill..

dope drop man, keep em comin

i thought it was a stretch too to be honest

nice to see some feed from you :flower:
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