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Rise & Shine [freestyle verse]

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Rise & Shine [freestyle verse]

Postby DƎRDYPK » Feb 4th, '10, 02:03

something I wrote up real quick high as fuck Image



I take a percocet & then I split it in half
I crushed it into dust now I sniff it & laugh
a maniac rap coming from a brain of smoke
I'll creep into ya house & I'll bloodstain ya throat
the jeepers creepers freak in a grim reaper mask
if these punks pack guns I ask em where the heaters at
wheres the reefer at? it's in my system no doubt
if I never met Mary Jane i'd leave my brains blown out
another unknown shout from the voices in my mind
they never quit the shit they be around all the time
telling me to cut my wrist telling me to not whine
"FUCK THAT YOU BITCH I'LL BE ALIVE FOR A LONG TIME"
the demons from the past come from nowhere & stalk me
at night I'm scared to fall asleep my tv will watch me
but then I drift off to another place in time
& then I awake in the morning new day rise & shine
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Re: Rise & Shine [freestyle verse]

Postby shadeonback » Feb 4th, '10, 02:18

if these punks pack guns I ask em where the heaters at
wheres the reefer at? it's in my system no doubt

lol haha, good shit mayne
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Re: Rise & Shine [freestyle verse]

Postby DƎRDYPK » Feb 4th, '10, 02:19

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Re: Rise & Shine [freestyle verse]

Postby Spyder » Feb 4th, '10, 02:23

dope shit for a free bro :smoking:
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Re: Rise & Shine [freestyle verse]

Postby DƎRDYPK » Feb 4th, '10, 02:43

Thanks Spyderman Image
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Re: Rise & Shine [freestyle verse]

Postby gutawafang » Feb 4th, '10, 03:01

wheres the reefer at? it's in my system no doubt
if I never met Mary Jane i'd leave my brains blown out

:worship: :worship: :worship:

Awesome! :worship:
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Re: Rise & Shine [freestyle verse]

Postby DƎRDYPK » Feb 4th, '10, 03:15

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Re: Rise & Shine [freestyle verse]

Postby DƎRDYPK » Feb 4th, '10, 03:20

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Re: Rise & Shine [freestyle verse]

Postby DƎRDYPK » Feb 4th, '10, 16:27

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I'm bout to kill whats left here
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Re: Rise & Shine [freestyle verse]

Postby Solace » Feb 5th, '10, 18:38

Pretty nice for a free, I suck at em so props to you :y:
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