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Punches

Postby Spyder » Feb 6th, '10, 19:25

punches i had left over from a couple pieces


Your best drops equivalent to mine on my worst days
Rhymes come in more numbers than Heffners birthdays.
See bro these words say, twice as much on that wordplay
Tryin to hit home… but your ass still on first base.
Heard em say I got nothin, emotions where im only shinin
Fuck that, come from behind, im coverin 2K10 like Kobe Bryant.
So tell the boys im home, fuck a tainted arrow use a poison bow
Enjoy it slow, see me I got shit covered like a toilet bowl.
The noise just blows, comparable to Nas cause I start Ill
These bars thrill, and end up with more e-beef that Farmville.
This harm will, be splitin ya if you spittin wit the sinista’
Killa, aimin dots my Train of thought will Eddie Griffin ya.
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Re: Punches

Postby Spyder » Feb 6th, '10, 19:39

thanks bro, you never seem to like my punches :'(
but i guess thats why these were leftovers :shakehead:
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Re: Punches

Postby Spyder » Feb 6th, '10, 19:41

but you said most were weak, only liked the farmville one :p

maybe you just dont get em :whistle:
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Re: Punches

Postby Low Key » Feb 6th, '10, 19:54

lol i hate farmville with a passion
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Re: Punches

Postby Spyder » Feb 6th, '10, 20:22

ok just checkin cole :sweating:
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Re: Punches

Postby classthe_king » Feb 7th, '10, 00:04

Pretty much agree with coleon
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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