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Whats In A Name

Postby Strictt Ame » Feb 6th, '10, 22:14

Lets start with Ame, shoulderin a gang of heartless pain
Never let the poisonous darts refrain until the targets slain
Doctors pick apart my brain to see what sparks the rage
But they remain clueless unless the pen marks the page
Then these drones are feelin me, lyrically Im a beast
Silence each whack emcee the moment they try to speak
Make’em bite their lips, tongue explodes inside their cheeks
Enemies commit suicide to me every time I ride the beat
Now I’ll explain why Im Strictt, Im known to limit you chumps
And if they aren’t givin it up then I give’em a punch
Mandible shots liftin’em up, cranium jabs sittin’em down
Hope you getting it now, Im just too sick with it pal
Always killin a crowd that catches even glimpse of my style
When rippin it Im the equivalent of Stephen Kings, IT with a crown
Put it together, that’s Strictt Ame, spit flames to rip lames
Blowin out competitors like a 12 twin gauge to the rib cage
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Re: Whats In A Name

Postby Spyder » Feb 6th, '10, 22:17

that was dope man, loved the concept of the track
multies were there and everytihng. didnt capatlize punches lol

good shit
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Re: Whats In A Name

Postby classthe_king » Feb 7th, '10, 00:05

Flow was flawless, multis were great, good drop
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Whats In A Name

Postby Strictt Ame » Feb 7th, '10, 04:53

Thanks yall..I just got bored so I figured I jot somethin down..but after re-readin this I might hafta record it..lol
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Re: Whats In A Name

Postby Strictt Ame » Feb 7th, '10, 05:01

Yeah I noticed that on IM..we seem to have a similar punch scheme..
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Re: Whats In A Name

Postby Spyder » Feb 7th, '10, 05:02

you guys got IM :o
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Re: Whats In A Name

Postby Strictt Ame » Feb 7th, '10, 05:03

Spyder wrote:you guys got IM :o

No IronMic..lol..I have IM (AIM/MSN) but I havent used em in years
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Re: Whats In A Name

Postby Spyder » Feb 7th, '10, 05:05

o gotchya, its gettin shut down? word

and you should get back on aim foo :smoking:
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Re: Whats In A Name

Postby Strictt Ame » Feb 7th, '10, 05:07

It might as well get shutdown, nobody is active at all..but the admins refuse to give it up..I dunno why, they just keep sayin the sites dead in the winter and to wait for spring but I dont buy it..oh well who cares..lol


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Re: Whats In A Name

Postby Spyder » Feb 7th, '10, 05:08

i only got Anon and Class on aim
and Class is never on :shakehead:
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Re: Whats In A Name

Postby classthe_king » Feb 7th, '10, 05:57

my I'm doesn't sign on automatically so I always forget to sign on.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Whats In A Name

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 7th, '10, 06:58

Good shit homie, nice concept multies :y: always good
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Re: Whats In A Name

Postby Element. » Feb 7th, '10, 17:44

Nice flow and multie's man
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