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Verse vs Verse

Postby 2sDay » Feb 6th, '10, 18:59

I want to see which verse is better to make a full song off of so choose the best in your opinions :flower:

Verse 1
Yo, I'm so fucking "dope", I sniff cocaine through a rope,
And elope with a million sluts, none left for the pope,
As they shake their brilliant butts, up goes my penus,
I'm a pimpin' duck, my beak is trippin' stuck in an anus,
I'm limpin' fuck them stanky hoes, burn their fancy clothes,
My favorite girl "skanky" goes, to get blowed at "Lowes",
Get some blunts, and have fun with cunts, better believe,
I'm as wasted as Eazy-E, flying "higher" than Chris Reeve,
I'm so high, I think I see smoke coming from my low thigh,
That much high, I might see Rosie O'Donnel fly by, poor sky,
Call "bitchy" my secondary hoe, and ask for my daily blow,
Dick shaking like Haiti yo, next thing ya know she in "snow",
Roll her in a mattress, cause of bad sex and a pussy like latex,
On to the next one, to put a hex on, starvin' like a T-Rex,
Create the best son, and...fuck it, i just want her to suck it,
Tuck her clit inside the dick, wait its the other way around..shit!,

OR

Verse 2
Pushed around kid, clown that stood this, beat down and stupid,
Just place the lid, while I have no place to live, place your bid,
Mother a bitch, she's a bother an itch, dig myslef another ditch,
The glitch to life, the witch I strife, time to put another stitch,
The same as slim, tight raps, bright lads, and might "collapse",
Relapse make me wanna go out and kill, still too young perhaps,
Stuck in booby traps, get caught in one and my groovin' stops,
While this kid bops, I'm struggling outside poppin' some glocks,
I'm just a gamma ray burst, cause if I'm coming your way first,
Your grave bursts open, 2sDay cursed you when he immersed,
This day you rehearsed I assume, and this is in no way a verse,
When the murderin' begins, no tenderin' wins, I have no friends,
Cross that fence between you and me, must've lost your sense,
Antipassive, when needed to, Sociopathic when beated and tricked,
Antipathic, aspiring Illmatic, rapper wiring rhyming inspiring static,
Admiring sick, wicked MCs, spitting truth not hugging crooked trees,
Looked at the ABC's, and then realized that rap was booked for me,
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Re: Verse vs Verse

Postby Strictt Ame » Feb 6th, '10, 19:27

Both were equally nice but I think your shoutin out Em too much..from his Christopher Reeves stuff to the Collapse line..be yourself man, dont just shout out names for the hell of it..maybe one punchline like "Im not Eminem but............"

But you did have some pretty good punches and similies in there..Id say the first verse minus the last 2 bars
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Re: Verse vs Verse

Postby 2sDay » Feb 6th, '10, 19:32

Strictt Ame wrote:Both were equally nice but I think your shoutin out Em too much..from his Christopher Reeves stuff to the Collapse line..be yourself man, dont just shout out names for the hell of it..maybe one punchline like "Im not Eminem but............"

But you did have some pretty good punches and similies in there..Id say the first verse minus the last 2 bars

lol thanks man.....

i had to say chris reeve cuz it rhymed and well.....he's superman lol :b:

but i know what your saying :smoking:
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Re: Verse vs Verse

Postby 2sDay » Feb 6th, '10, 22:57

bump :whistle:
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Re: Verse vs Verse

Postby 2sDay » Feb 7th, '10, 02:03

bumpin to the 2nd power :smoking:
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Re: Verse vs Verse

Postby Element. » Feb 7th, '10, 17:42

Yo, I'm so fucking "dope", I sniff cocaine through a rope,
And elope with a million sluts, none left for the pope,

First line made me laugh in a good way :y:
everything else is good man keep it up
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Re: Verse vs Verse

Postby 2sDay » Feb 7th, '10, 17:48

^ lol thanks man :p

so im guessing the first one is your favorite? :unsure:
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Re: Verse vs Verse

Postby Element. » Feb 7th, '10, 18:01

2sDay wrote:^ lol thanks man :p

so im guessing the first one is your favorite? :unsure:


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