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Tangled in dreamcatchers

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 7th, '10, 17:04

Reaching up from my pillow tangled in dreamcatchers,
Angels with wing feathers strangle extreme measures,
Angle the screams better unable to see weather,
Only a fable it seems wetter fangs ready to be redder,
Seen better through keen measures of the chiefs lectures,
The "Abel" of these records put you on 3 stretchers,
Unable to sing better my vocal chords are open sores when the noise stops,
The Overlords local whore stabbing broken swords through my vioce box,
Screamin till my dad stops the padlock where the joys locked,
Swallowing alchohol without a mouth at all, life tumbling down like toy blocks,
The fist stops inches from the goal, Usain Bolt with his hip locked,
My nose goes drip drop from the tip top when my gift stops,
Slave to the tic toc, no success for the subject of my wrist watch
Stuck in this box with my the lat 10 rescues have flown right past it,
Puttin explosives on the Decomposed roses thrown in ya casket,
Tryin not to say something drastic, all this pain I masked it,
Cause I'm past it right, my rhymes tight, saliva is acid,
Plastic contraption for a heart my last ones' blackened
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Tangled in dreamcatchers

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Feb 7th, '10, 17:39

"In Plastic contraption for a heart my last ones' blackened"

I interpreted as "I'm on my death bed. I regret my life. I try to lull myself to dream of pleasantries and die in my sleep. The dreamcatchers won't let me. Those fables and the chief's lectures were to make me strong enough to accept death. I die in pain, but I die a man".

That's the vibe I got.

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Re: Tangled in dreamcatchers

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 7th, '10, 18:03

Thats pretty much it man :worship: Thanks for checkin though homie appreciate it :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Tangled in dreamcatchers

Postby Strictt Ame » Feb 7th, '10, 19:12

Dope concept..flow was amazing to me..multi were borderline mastermind..sick shit, one of my favorite drops from you..


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Re: Tangled in dreamcatchers

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 7th, '10, 19:25

Thank big homie. And hell yeah nukka check it
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Tangled in dreamcatchers

Postby classthe_king » Feb 7th, '10, 19:31

Dang, multis in this were incredible :worship:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Tangled in dreamcatchers

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 7th, '10, 19:36

Hell yeah lol we gotta collab on some insane multis shit sometime class
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Tangled in dreamcatchers

Postby classthe_king » Feb 7th, '10, 19:37

Yah-hah wrote:Hell yeah lol we gotta collab on some insane multis shit sometime class


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Re: Tangled in dreamcatchers

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 8th, '10, 09:30

I'll PM you when I get some more heat
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Tangled in dreamcatchers

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 8th, '10, 10:29

Those last three bars were mad dope...this piece really had no point though :p ...so we can do Dreamcatcher...dude it'll be dope
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Re: Tangled in dreamcatchers

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 8th, '10, 10:41

Well GGG said wat it was about but we will still do dreamcatchers lol pm me son or just text me
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Tangled in dreamcatchers

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 10th, '10, 16:14

Bumpin
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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