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Explosive Temper (Throwaway 16)

Postby Solace » Feb 9th, '10, 02:18

Garbage verse enjoy...

Judging me, staring like my writtens weren't nothing true,
So I smirk and joke, then I stick my middle finger up at you,
And your attitudes bother me awfully as I'm writing these,
Lines, don't put up that fake act, trying to act nice to me?
Bagged clothes, a fag show, always acting tough to teens?
You're nothing see, I'll leave you with no blood to bleed,
Fucking fake, your guts I take, serve onto disgusting plates,
Ya fat bitch can have it, either way she always stuffing face,
You're nothing great, like the banker you breaking deals,
Smash your face, lacerate, see this is how you make me feel,
After these years I have to hate, beat you at a faster rate,
Than chaingun fires, wires tied you up, I'll have you stay,
Then I slice your fingers, one by one, I tape the screams,
Slice into your cranium, insanely fun how I make you stream,
Exaggeration coming harder than masturbation, I tag you,
Like Facebook pictures, now picture me as I bodybag you.
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Re: Explosive Temper (Throwaway 16)

Postby gutawafang » Feb 9th, '10, 02:20

I'll leave you with no blood to bleed, :worship:

There are other nice punches I think. :y:
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Re: Explosive Temper (Throwaway 16)

Postby Solace » Feb 9th, '10, 03:34

You think? So you didn't really read it? Aha it's all good thanks for checking bro I appreciate. :y:
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Re: Explosive Temper (Throwaway 16)

Postby gutawafang » Feb 9th, '10, 04:04

Solace wrote:You think? So you didn't really read it? Aha it's all good thanks for checking bro I appreciate. :y:

I read the whole thing. I was just lazy to quote the every punch in there man. :p
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Re: Explosive Temper (Throwaway 16)

Postby Solace » Feb 9th, '10, 04:23

gutawafang wrote:
Solace wrote:You think? So you didn't really read it? Aha it's all good thanks for checking bro I appreciate. :y:

I read the whole thing. I was just lazy to quote the every punch in there man. :p

It's all good dude, and by the way cute girl in your avatar :y:

You know I'm always with the asians :wub:
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Re: Explosive Temper (Throwaway 16)

Postby Spyder » Feb 9th, '10, 23:52

Solace wrote:

Smash your face, lacerate, see this is how you make me feel,
After these years I have to hate, beat you at a faster rate,

Exaggeration coming harder than masturbation, I tag you,


you like my verse from 5 Stars :laughing:

jus messin, you know i love ya ;)

but yeah overall wasnt feeling this peice. lack of your normal multies and what not.
but its a throwaway so whatever :smoking:
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Re: Explosive Temper (Throwaway 16)

Postby Solace » Feb 10th, '10, 01:27

Spyder wrote:
Solace wrote:

Smash your face, lacerate, see this is how you make me feel,
After these years I have to hate, beat you at a faster rate,

Exaggeration coming harder than masturbation, I tag you,


you like my verse from 5 Stars :laughing:

jus messin, you know i love ya ;)

You used those lines? :unsure:

thanks for checkin bro.. :y:
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Re: Explosive Temper (Throwaway 16)

Postby Spyder » Feb 10th, '10, 01:56

naw just those words ina block like that. but honestly it aint no thang :smoking:
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