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Quick 16 line freestyle

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Quick 16 line freestyle

Postby dfg » Feb 10th, '10, 06:50

This is my 16, Im pristine
Im the mean teens dream destroying self esteem
If you wanna test me then feel free
But Im comin up quicker than pre teens on ecstasy
So if you step to me and my complexity
Ill rip out your insides like hysterectomy
Its not a bet you see but inevitably
You're never gettin rid or getting ahead of me
Im the best you've seen in the underground scene
Im a lyrical G O D it seems
Im getting cocky but I know you know its me
Thats sittin in the seat where the queen should be
I know Im big headed but you know I speak
Nothing but the truth with my flow is bleak
Offering no hope to these hopeless freak
And all the motherf*ckers whos flow is weak
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