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depression from the dollar

Postby Just Silver » Feb 10th, '10, 23:51

Quick keystyle hope ya guys like it :sweating: :D ----



i have been stressed yet i make an oath,
to take a soul,claim vege-table, status ,yep i know
i live a boring life, its true, who woulda knew
other than you, and you, and few, that do not move,
retired at young age, before i climb up to the dumb rage
and do some stupid shit i could of missed, but i have quit
alright thats it, the whitest kid that u know ,without the skit
about to get pills just blue and green ,and in between,
like algae weed and coco leaves, supporting me,
a mix of unstable heart pounding boredom,
i wish i could break apart my origin,
restore with the life, i would be chosen rich
no folks and kids, be less than budget
digress food, from stomachs bypass those who govern
but if i had been rich would i be better,
could i consider the same temper ,
remain member, of a group that hates gender,
and mentions bitches ,instead of girlish figures
that world i live in, isn't like that for now
but if it were sure i'd just go down
tax proud ignorant citizen,
facts aloud from math crowds, creativity is a sin,
never would grab a pen, unless its a document,
invest in Nike but would never be rockin it,
no need to speed so forget about clocking it,
that nice white dude, no one has a damn problem with
would i live grand, and spend grands, on grams
or have a benz ,depends, if i meet ends
and be decent, live big on the beach bend
but at least then,get, retro cars
clothes and watches, the get go's ours
i mean the riches on boats, and the stars
dove into bars, and never be on guard,
buy big bottles of shit i dont like,
just so i can brag about the price
and bag that ass i like
if the cash is right
and if shes drunk enough hope shes fucked up
then wave to my pilot im over here
get drunk off life and never have a sober year
Last edited by Just Silver on Feb 11th, '10, 03:41, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: depression from the dollar

Postby classthe_king » Feb 11th, '10, 03:30

I didn't pick up on the rhyme scheme for awhile :laughing: Rhyming was alright, good for a keystyle. Flow wasn't very good but for a keystyle that doesnt really matter. Just keep doin yo thing, ive seen improvement.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: depression from the dollar

Postby Just Silver » Feb 11th, '10, 03:38

classthe_king wrote:I didn't pick up on the rhyme scheme for awhile :laughing: Rhyming was alright, good for a keystyle. Flow wasn't very good but for a keystyle that doesnt really matter. Just keep doin yo thing, ive seen improvement.

i needed to put commas but i didnt it improves it alot
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