My Path to Destruction

[Edge]

im sure this will get no feed as usual, but as usual feeds apreciated

This is my path, my path to destruction
Whats made me crazed? I can not function
Goin down the wrong path, is it my fault?
Cant express my feelings, my minds a locked vault
This is my path, my path to devastation
gotta keep going until my final levitation
What has made me insane? I can not operate
Headed to the gutter, filled to the top with hate

Suddenly starting to realize that I stay forever blazed
And when I write my feelings, every letters laced
Every week I smoke more grass than the Everglades
Its got my brain tortured in tar and feather ways
Iv seen better days, but it storms-'fore-the-calm
Starting to feel crucified with nails torn-in-my-palm
I drop verbal bombs, with nothing else-to-follow
I seem complete on the outside but myself-is-hollow
I felt hallowed when I stopped my drug-tendencies
But I got crazed, felt like everyone was offending-me
Everyone twisted and bended-me, in all different-directions
That’s about the time that I started to listen-to-weapons
I was in the misdirection, fallin down the wrong path
But I had this power robbin people for strong cash
Making money off of drug deals and the stick-ups
Me and my crew would split it and each get thick-cuts
Money was good, so I was back to smoking, feelin great
Weed and money came easy, cause I was stealing weight
So this is simply the story of how I became this swine
And Il stay this way until I finally regain my mind

This is my path, my path to destruction
Whats made me crazed? I can not function
Goin down the wrong path, is it my fault?
Cant express my feelings, my minds a locked vault
This is my path, my path to devastation
gotta keep going until my final levitation
What has made me insane? I can not operate
Headed to the gutter, filled to the top with hate

Every line I write, at night, gets more homicidal
Show me your favorite rapper, I shall bomb-his-title
It is my spot, I will take it whether u like it or not
Im not the cocky type, but everything I write is hot
I am blazed in my mind and blazed in my writing
Cant do the right thing, people ask for tithing
But I got no time or money to give away
Legs give away, don’t know if il live today
Every moment spent in strict contemplation
friends and family? well shit, got-them-hatin
Demonstratin more devastation, than suffered by them Haitians
Earthquake, nerves break, don’t know my options
Blaze another blunt, my mouth turns to cotton
I am never stopping, but I gotta slow-it-down
All you see is lyrics with the sharpest flow around
But its more than that, you guys gotta get analytical
Iv been crazed since birth, arrest my umbilical
I try to stay lyrical but sometimes I get off-task
Never agree with God but someday wel cross-paths

This is my path, my path to destruction
Whats made me crazed? I can not function
Goin down the wrong path, is it my fault?
Cant express my feelings, my minds a locked vault
This is my path, my path to devastation
gotta keep going until my final levitation
What has made me insane? I can not operate
Headed to the gutter, filled to the top with hate

[Edge]

thanks for feedback

[gutawafang]

thanks for feedback

LOL. Sorry for late feedback man.

The so called hook or chorus, I didn't like it, mainly because I personally can't flow it.

But the verses. Splendid.

Earthquake, nerves break, don’t know my options
Blaze another blunt, my mouth turns to cotton

Overall, it has good concept, nice storyline. I can connect.

[Edge]

thanks my man... il work on that chorus

[Edge]

bump

[classthe_king]

The chorus for me was ehhhh, but better then anything i could do because im horrible at choruses. Lyrics were good, you've improved a ton. Multi's were good for the most part, try some more internals. Flow was good, not great, from what i saw there was a couple parts where the flow wasn't very good but this is text so its all good

[Edge]

The chorus for me was ehhhh, but better then anything i could do because im horrible at choruses. Lyrics were good, you've improved a ton. Multi's were good for the most part, try some more internals. Flow was good, not great, from what i saw there was a couple parts where the flow wasn't very good but this is text so its all good

thanks man, i hate choruses lol

[macdaddy019967]

lyrics were good but could be better
I liked it but try not to force the multis
good drop

[Edge]

lyrics were good but could be better
I liked it but try not to force the multis
good drop

thanks for the feed man

[Fa-Q]

Liked it a lot...I thought the chorus was fine...great verses and wordplay...and love the multis...keep it up

[Edge]

Liked it a lot...I thought the chorus was fine...great verses and wordplay...and love the multis...keep it up

thanks man, i appreciate it... idk if im going to keep the chorus or make a new one