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HAITI DISS.

Postby J Roc » Feb 11th, '10, 23:48

On a Haiti Mission Cuz i Hate Emissions They Won't Get a Dime From Me
U Should Try & Leave cuz Ur Country Sucks i guess ur just too Blind To See
I Hope The Climates Weak , Prime For Heat I Bet Your Gonna Die This Week
Whuts Funny? Look Ur Whole 'Country's Shook' Like they wont grab a Mic To Speak
It's Time to Meet Ur Islands Cheif I Hope ur Not Too Jealous When i Bring Knives to Eat
When i munch on ur Pine & Tree's Dont Worry atleast u can kinda Breathe
It's Too Bad Ur Woman's On Food Stamp's When i Can BUY Some Cheese
I Guess It's Kinda Mean That Whenever you gotta shit You Gotta Find Some Leaves
But instead of donating it i took 10Dollars Just so i could Buy Some Weed
We Wasn't In Love With u Crooks , Want a Tip to like u? Don't Judge the Cover On Books
Shittt Cuz the world hates you , No Wonder It Shook


Lighttworrrrrkkkkk lmaooo!!!!!! who hates me now hahaha
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Re: HAITI DISS.

Postby Solace » Feb 11th, '10, 23:48

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Re: HAITI DISS.

Postby Spyder » Feb 12th, '10, 00:03

:laughing:


wheres my freestyle :'(
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Re: HAITI DISS.

Postby Tomega » Feb 12th, '10, 00:33

lol. hateful, but funny.

i can sense some sarcasm too though.
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Re: HAITI DISS.

Postby Just Silver » Feb 12th, '10, 00:47

yeah fuck haiti
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Re: HAITI DISS.

Postby Relapse.LP » Feb 12th, '10, 00:51

Just Silver wrote:yeah fuck haiti

Wow. I can't express, in words, my reaction to that statement.

Unless it was sarcasm. :shakehead:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Postby Fa-Q » Feb 12th, '10, 00:54

Just Silver wrote:yeah fuck haiti

What?
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Re: HAITI DISS.

Postby Just Silver » Feb 12th, '10, 00:54

Relapse.LP wrote:
Just Silver wrote:yeah fuck haiti

Wow. I can't express, in words, my reaction to that statement.

Unless it was sarcasm. :shakehead:

obviously sarcasm but im just really surprised at this and the approval of everyone

as a piece it was done really well i just think its a little to offensive but fuck it :smoking: do what you do
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Re: HAITI DISS.

Postby Relapse.LP » Feb 12th, '10, 00:55

Just Silver wrote:
Relapse.LP wrote:
Just Silver wrote:yeah fuck haiti

Wow. I can't express, in words, my reaction to that statement.

Unless it was sarcasm. :shakehead:

obviously sarcasm but im just really surprised at this

The piece or my reaction? :whistle:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: HAITI DISS.

Postby Just Silver » Feb 12th, '10, 00:59

this is starting to feel like a riddle so let me clear things up lol

i was being sarcastic when i said fuck haiti because no one had said this piece was over doing it

but once i put "fuck haiti " i figured there would be a difference you see, and there was :sweating:
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Re: HAITI DISS.

Postby Relapse.LP » Feb 12th, '10, 01:00

Just Silver wrote:this is starting to feel like a riddle so let me clear things up lol

i was being sarcastic when i said fuck haiti because no one had said this piece was over doing it

but once i put "fuck haiti " i figured there would be a difference you see, and there was :sweating:

Haha, I get it.

Yeah, I thought this verse was overdoing it, even though it wasn't for real.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: HAITI DISS.

Postby gutawafang » Feb 12th, '10, 02:25

Nice one Roc. :coffee:
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Re: HAITI DISS.

Postby Spyder » Feb 12th, '10, 02:51

thanks for not puting mine in :laughing:
obvious people on a forum care about words... :smoking:
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Re: HAITI DISS.

Postby J Roc » Feb 12th, '10, 03:39

Spyder wrote:thanks for not puting mine in :laughing:
obvious people on a forum care about words... :smoking:


I don't have ur's haha .. my bad homie. send me it or something n i'll edit it in lol

& Thanks for peeping & Feeding Everyone.
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