Re: GoodGirlsGetGutted vs. Gutawafang (Guta wins)

by **GoodGirlsGetGutted** » Feb 12th, '10, 06:53

How detailed can I be in your FEMALE ANATOMY 'fore you
Rat on me to Sajn and get me BANNED because you're MAD AT ME
I've had a peek and DAMN if you could see just what the PHANTOM'S SEEN
You'd see that 'Fang's REALITY is nothing but a FALLACY
I GUTTED GUTA, cut like butter, It'd make your STOMACH FLUTTER
Discovered cum of others, must of FUCKED him with no RUBBER
Anal passage maimed and ravaged, took a savage BEATING
Ain't no average task to have his ass all cracked and BLEEDING
What, Ya FINGERED MORE in SINGAPORE than other Asians?
He's LYIN' IF HE says that LION CITY hasn't raped him

by **gutawafang** » Feb 12th, '10, 08:21

I gladly rep Singapore, the Lion City with a roar
I'm the cat with "smart claws", slash this pussy hardcore
I said, "pussy", just hide behind the "buffalos"
You're the "good-girl-getting-gutted", "red" shall overflow
4 "Gs" but not so gangsta, he's doing it "for jizz"
I'm just one "G", GUTAWAFANG, swing you one-eighty degrees
I'ma be the one to "Guta" you, see I play with my own name
But I still own this fucking drone in this game
This faggot's just a "CORPSE intercourse with infants"
Yeah, a literal corpse when I obliterate you in an instant

Line 2: "Smart claws" means my attacks are smart
Line 3: Imagine a cat hiding behind a buffalo. Buffalo is his country
Line 4: Nameplay and my country's flag has red and
he's making it redder after this battle
http://www.33ff.com/flags/XL_flags/Singapore_flag.gif
Line 5: his username has 4 "Gs" in it and I used wordplay
Line 6: You know, his avatar. I'm swinging him
Line 9: His sig

by **GoodGirlsGetGutted** » Feb 12th, '10, 08:24

You don't have to "explain" your lines, they should speak for themselves.

Vote!

by **gutawafang** » Feb 12th, '10, 08:27

GoodGirlsGetGutted wrote:You don't have to "explain" your lines, they should speak for themselves.

Vote!

I just thought I wanna do that, just for fun. :sweating:

Yeah, vote!

by **Enimee** » Feb 12th, '10, 18:00

(3) Punchlines_4g
(3) Personals_guta
(2) Multies_tie
(1) Flow_4g
(1) Structure_tie
(1) Vocab/Complex_4g
(1) Other_4g

4g's was nice son shit was on anotha level guta sorry but he ripped it

by **GoodGirlsGetGutted** » Feb 12th, '10, 18:06

^Thanks for voting.

1-0 Quad-G.

by **Spyder** » Feb 12th, '10, 21:25

4Gs your verse was weak homie, no hate just sayin. you ended your first line wrong, didnt rhyme wit the second one. and imo the caps were annoying but o well

(3) Punchlines - guta
(3) Personals - Tie
(2) Multies - 4G, but they were weak. only had internal multies...
(1) Flow - guta
(1) Structure - Tie
(1) Vocab/Complex - none
(1) Other - guta(wordplay)

5-2

not the best battle. but guta gets it for me

by **GoodGirlsGetGutted** » Feb 12th, '10, 21:47

Spyder wrote:4Gs your verse was weak homie, no hate just sayin. you ended your first line wrong, didnt rhyme

False.
"Female anatomy" falls on the downbeat of the first measure, while 'fore you" catched the cusp of the upbeat before the second measure (4/4 common time). That's why I use caps, to help guide the reader as to where the upbeats and downbeats are.
You're flat out incorrect in that assessment.

1-2

by **Spyder** » Feb 12th, '10, 21:50

this is a text battle, there is no beat to go by
the end of the lines are better to rhyme, just sayin shoulda put "fore you" on the next line
woulda made the structure worse but rhyme alot better

by **gutawafang** » Feb 13th, '10, 05:39

Haha. Thanks a lot for voting, Spyder, Enimee, and Geno! :happy:

And you just changed your sig, Gutted. :'(

by **GoodGirlsGetGutted** » Feb 13th, '10, 05:49

Guta, since this was "just for fun", rate both of ours objectively. This will at least make a little interesting for me (I've been reminded of just how much I hate text battling)

(3) Punchlines - you
(3) Personals - you
(2) Multies - me
(1) Flow - me
(1) Structure - me
(1) Vocab/Complex - me
(1) Other - you (last 2 bars)

7-5, you

I'm very interested to know your opinion.

by **gutawafang** » Feb 13th, '10, 06:12

(3) Punchlines - Me
(3) Personals - Nil
(2) Multies - You, definitely
(1) Flow - You
(1) Structure - Me
(1) Vocab/Complex - You
(1) Other - Nameplay-Me
Wordplay-Me

Sorry late reply.

Well, honestly, I do not like the voting system. But I guess that's how I rate it.

6-4 in favor of me. :sweating:

Do you wanna count our votes? Seriously, I don't think it's okay.

by **GoodGirlsGetGutted** » Feb 13th, '10, 06:28

First you say you don't like the ratings system, then you say you don't want to count our votes.
Even you have to admit that text battling is bullshit.
For all you know, I could have had a skeleton verse written that I could just have filled your name in where it needed personals.
And for all I know, you could have been writing that verse for hours instead of saying your "friday prayers".
These are just hypothetical examples, but don't you see the hypocrisy?
From henceforth, I denounce text battling like Lucifer denounces God.

Either count the votes (4-1) or consider me forfeit, because I hate this shit with a passion.
(Sorry to put you through this. I thought I would enjoy it, but... never again)

by **gutawafang** » Feb 13th, '10, 07:20

Alright, thanks for the battle man. You decided that I win? :sweating:

by **GoodGirlsGetGutted** » Feb 13th, '10, 07:21

gutawafang wrote:Alright, thanks for the battle man. You decided that I win?

Change your sig, you're 7-4 now!

Geno, in case you haven't noticed, I'm never doing this again so leave it.