Mind Of A Killer (My first time ever writing a verse)

[Brandon S]

I'm high as fuck right now, so I just really quickly just fucked around and made this. And thought I might as well post it up on here since most of you know your shit about rap music. Haha, anyway, here it is....


Creepin' at ya door, lookin' for some human flesh
High on meth, chasin' you 'round til' ya outta breath
Know ya near death when I grab you from behind
Choke ya spine crack ya fuckin' neckline
Yo ass is mine rape you til i'm satisfied
Awesome fuckin' ride that ass so fuckin' wide
Time to tie you up and throw you in a river
Your body don't shiver your just bleedin' out your liver
Victim #1 is done that shit was mighty fun
Don't even need a gun but remember that was only one
There's plenty more victims, plenty more fun

It isn't finished, and depending on how I feel about this verse in the morning i'll decide if I will actually finish up the entire song.. cause I have no idea if it's dope or horrible. Haha, so yeah, Feedback?

[ShAdY CaPo 08]

ill.

[Brandon S]

ill.

o shit wazzup bro its been a while.. yo i got a mic, so imma start writing more and shit, i'm just gettin started so thats y my flow and shits probly rly off lol. but yeah, im gonna start recording..