Stuck in An iPod

by **Just Silver** » Feb 13th, '10, 05:17

idk couldnt stop writing lol

The emcee stuck in an MP3
scroll wheel stuck on his lucidity
who is it me couldnt think i was highlighted
or even stop to think if i liked it
but i bumped my self till earbuds popped
smoked good green look like a tear gun shot
keep on walking with my small white coffin
on full blast pull past a nasty artist
who had much of the same material
comparison visual on iTunes video
was it meant to be me as a savior
of the jotted paper turned to a starving major
maybe lets listen a little deeper
go to the dungeon find the key keeper
open up creepin door starts squeaking
mixtape demons unleash angered treason
slay that to go and save rap
come back leg collapsed and half a heartattack
legendary hero paving ways
through modern airwaves saving grace
on MP3 no one pays
CD roms the shit changed
search limewire for days
rhymes dire it plays on the deadly fire of spades
aint no poker game no poker face
unpopular songs i could use a break
from mass media appeal i appeal that
reveal rap at the truest form clashed
the wicked ash of the fiery depths of mind
liars step aside you dont know rap your blind
lil wayne plays weeks on end
hes a trend well when the fuck does it end
wasnt he last years too
damn he should be last years news
lollipop terrible others were identical
sounding astounding hes raps principal
and eminem is minimal
at least on todays ipod schedule
so i fled and wrote a little ghost
took a pen to my throat live for my notes
electronics and ebonics don't mix
we should have kept it how it did
radio, nas and oldschool gs
got so high our damn nose would bleed
ill clothes were free they were hand me downs
now we wait at malls and stand around
for the new jays that jay don't wear today
or the forces of course shit
even the poorest rock the thread bit
stuck in a era full of errors
determinate hystera-call metaphors
and keep it real with flow
CDs bitch seen these before
remember big and shakur
and jayz december the 4th
but i have had it with ipod madness
ive gone rabid in the wild poems that which
made meaning to define definition
maids eating like its missed comprehension
its backwards words that spit fat verse
we'd converse and a good time was always
so remember that next time in raps hallways
in the 90's it was already paved.

by **GoodGirlsGetGutted** » Feb 13th, '10, 05:55

I thought the line about cds being dead was bullshit, but it was good. I really felt like I was in the middle of the story.

by **gutawafang** » Feb 13th, '10, 06:15

That's hilarious! In a good way man! :worship:

I liked it and enjoyed it! :worship:

by **Just Silver** » Feb 13th, '10, 15:58

GoodGirlsGetGutted wrote:I thought the line about cds being dead was bullshit, but it was good. I really felt like I was in the middle of the story.

it will be true in a few years from now and thanks for the feed

by **Just Silver** » Feb 13th, '10, 20:04

gutawafang wrote:That's hilarious! In a good way man!

I liked it and enjoyed it!

thanks guy
:happy:

by **Fa-Q** » Feb 13th, '10, 21:34

Love the flow on this...good piece

by **Yah-hah** » Feb 14th, '10, 02:45

Yeah the flow on this was crazy smooth. Rhymes were dope and concept was a cool new twist. Good shit bro :y:

by **Just Silver** » Feb 14th, '10, 02:47

Yah-hah wrote::worship: Yeah the flow on this was crazy smooth. Rhymes were dope and concept was a cool new twist. Good shit bro

good looks on the feed

tried something different and couldnt stop for a while

by **Yah-hah** » Feb 14th, '10, 02:49

Man I do that all the time lmao

by **Just Silver** » Feb 14th, '10, 02:52

Yah-hah wrote:Man I do that all the time lmao

hey don't matter lol still gotta give thanks :happy:

plus its a bump

(ps) so was this :8)

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