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Come battle (1 diss each)

Postby Vettori » Jan 31st, '06, 04:29

I Dunno why your parents even thought of givin you life,
You as useless as bringin a fuckin Knife to a Gunfight
Your like the Blueprints of a buildin, Just needs to get laid out
Cause talkin shit behind backs, Will have you talkin with no mouth
This here is way to funny Man you can't even spit,
Iv'e seen a guy with no Teeth spit more valueble shit
A bum in the gudder is right, You should take his place
But you couldn't do good at that, let alone replace faith
You like a man with one leg, that tries to kick his own ass
Does a full nelson, sticks like a golf tee in the grass
"Four" is what i'm yellin But your Nothing like Zero
As soon as I get My clubs, They screamin "Faith is my hero"
The punches strike alot harder, I'm as hot as a match
Your lucky im a worthy opponent, Put me out i'm sparkin too fast
I spread easy like a knife that Cuts and spreads like butter
I whip along, Do the same thing to a forest Fire
Be burnin anyoneone up, Like an MC reactin
Man pick up ur vocals, And lay off please quit actin
You like jim carrey with a lil comic inside ya
gettin Papercuts, and cut up alone, then lit on Fiya
So get at me Mutha fucker You should pay attention in class
Cause it seems to me you talk more shit out yur mouth then ur ass

"Faith"
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Postby polluted » Jan 31st, '06, 09:41

what a fucking lame verse
bitch, quit rhymin u aint shit like a bitch fiddy on ya fucking avatar.
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Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 31st, '06, 09:57

weak fucking shit, are u serious?
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Postby X-Ray » Jan 31st, '06, 14:10

try a different style ;) otherwise it wasnt as bad as dope's first rhyme here
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Postby Mc Cubz » Jan 31st, '06, 19:59

[color=blue]Yo
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Postby Vettori » Jan 31st, '06, 22:10

lmao, I was just tryin out some punchlines lol, see if thata work for me, Clearly it isn't...Well ima just stick to my, audio's and stuff....ez, thanx for replys LMAO
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Postby ARTILLERY » Feb 1st, '06, 05:45

Hey mr mc cubz i need a roll of tumz after reading that shit
u betta give it up and quit go back to suckin on your mamas tit
............check it ima bout to pop the top of the top off this shit right here so dont come near/ubetta fear the surprize of my rimes /c ive one the grand prize / i got this shit supersized comin at u live or did u just realalize /for real it all seams kinda sureal when it comes out this felling that i fell gives me a chill up and down my spine most of the time i can find the right line to express whats on my mind at the right time chillin feelin sumblime surrounded by a smoke cloud of the kind its gonna be mine bitch i dont wanna hear u wine keep it up and ima barey u under that big o pine tree ya feel me /shoe fly fle or get caught with my tiger knee there'll be no crumpets and tea wit me /u betta make like a bee and buzz cause i aint fuckin around fuck around and get drowend while everybody crowds around ta wacth u get clowned around /now i know what ur thinkin this shit sounds perfound but if u could hear the sound of my voice u would'int have any choice its the glue holdin together the joice/just lie back cross your arms as i hoist your body in to the ground where the last sound u hear around u is silince
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Postby polluted » Feb 1st, '06, 06:23

to sloppy artillery

your rhyme suck it squeaks like my ol' sneakers
why you came here, you rap worse than weaker
even faith did a better job coz he wasn't fake
forget rap leave the place you aint gonna make
so many blunders and stupid mistakes
what happed, you got tossed out of first grades?
You just a tattle tella, your shit is a whackload
how many folks you say you popped to go see GOD?
Well I guess NONE
It's so fucking easy to say: back off, n*gga i got a gun
Except for you got NONE
Fake bitch get on a run
Screaming around deuce - deuce
What a whacko, you just a slut liking man juice
I aint packig toast, anyways imma get you plastered
In a hand fight you fucking pussy it what I mastered
Whoop your ass so hard make you a tard
you foget ya moms name, die and no stick with memorylane
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Postby DOPE » Feb 1st, '06, 08:19

i split raps, chew em in half
if Dre signs me, ima flip the bird to the Aftermath staff
stickin it up like i never stuck up two middle finger nails
i drop a single each day, it be like KFC zinger sales
without the bird flu episode
ima let it go, im in a reppin mode
step on toes , i crush em
i take a shit, in all public toilets, i never flush em
sleep naked at nite, with my nutts slipin out the sheets
in the dark they look like boogey man, chippin out the trees
i punch in the mirror have the glass shoved in my hands
stand up side down, n fuck a bitch, she aint never bin loved in this stance
ima steal all ur feeders n all ur diapers
cuz when my baby be on the way, i dont get my chic hyper
some dude wants me to spark his hash, ima hand em a gass less liter
run away n laff at him, like the situation never bin this titer
n if anydude wants to beef with me, n trys to put me in fear
ima set thee alarm for 5AM, reach 5 minutes earlier, n tape the clock to his ear!
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Postby DOPE » Feb 1st, '06, 08:21

that shit aint aimed at ANYBODY!
cuz i dont wanna battle
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Postby polluted » Feb 1st, '06, 10:09

ima set thee alarm for 5AM, reach 5 minutes earlier, n tape the clock to his ear!


uhahhaahahhh
huh huh huh


what a lame fuck, still choking wif dat shit :D
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Postby $0 R3@L » Feb 1st, '06, 13:07

LMAO^^^ :happy:
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Tony Yayo > 50 cent
yoshi wrote:even after all those years.. So Real > Jesus
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Postby SoniK » Feb 1st, '06, 17:32

im the king pf pnch lines lyk i was born with a punchin bag
i came out, u came CESARIAN, so i cut u up lyk my lunch in bags
i'm havin fun just punchin fags, stab u with my car key
hav key hole surgery thru ya vein underneath ur khaki
im lyk a message to weak mcs, i put u out like fire, so keep burnin
wen u spit knowledge, im gettin knowledge.hehe so keep learnin
bout ur lil punch lines, all they are is fliks to me
ur just lil pussies tryna be some dicks to me
u a hole, A or front of the female, i ent choosin i ent fussy
either way u a vagina just cryin FUCK ME!
manz get posted up like billboards, so chek ya self
thas what i call advertising death and bad health
fuck fifty, i put a G in a Unit of my own and keep moving
so fuck leavin, these heathens tryna rough out the game i'm soothing
i'm so smooth and, like mercedes suspension, never fluttered most def
spit that politicial bullshit like my name was mos def
u mcs tryna be gangster, but u luk lyk me in nursery timews
thenu question why u spittin nursery rhymes
i got this whole shit locked, and i swallowed the key
im on a hype, find this shit so simple, i wud ghost write for free
but then expose the rapper and tell em how its ment to be told
i held the mic, u people still tryna get a grip and see how it hold
i;m too cold, like ice...but no global warming melt me
wen i spit, the whole crowed felt me
open ur ears and close ur eyes cuz i spit that venom that myt blind u
slit ya throat, hav u bleedin feel my fist ryt behind u
R.i.p big proof

what now??
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Postby Mc Cubz » Feb 1st, '06, 18:41

[color=blue]Artillery you shouldn
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Postby Ka0t1c » Feb 1st, '06, 20:24

I put your 'rep in question' with my 'impressive present action'
to 'test' every 'perspective' of ya 'mind ur wreckin'
and I 'find ur destined' to 'die' with no 'kind' of 'resurrection'
'like' ur 'Christ' with your 'passion' when u 'write that text' cuz im an 'assassin'
and on the record, you'll lose your 'traction' on ya next 'track-it's' time to 'settle' or I'll 'attack, so' let's 'battle' but yeah I 'bet you', it's 'best to' lie behind the 'shadows' than decide 'that you'll' stand 'high' as a 'statue' with ur 'rhymes' that ur 'attached to'
are u 'blind', even 'deaf too'? whether ya 'tryin threats' on this 'entire thread'
or 'applyin' a 'schedule' to 'reply' ur ready to 'fight', I 'guess-do' 'whatever'
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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