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[Enimee]

immediately intimidatin rappers who wann instigate
this ill cat in different ways till he brings the instant hate
in one way or another i will interrogate impersonators who imitate
got a loaded gun for a mouth with an itchy trigger finger
to eradicate you and all them men that your brigin wit ya
in any case its safe to say i got this game on lock in a major way
whil yall yall are improperly in coordination with sever violations and just in case
you were imagining possibilities of escape red beams will dot your face
like chicken pox scars real fuckin permanent
and your petty beef?well luiciles not concerned with it
my gat is indiscriminate any cat can get a clip
or maybe a fraction of these 6 from this gattlin i keep strapped to my hip
with force comparaible to the collision of tectonic plates
ill hit this man in the face with bionic aim
in psychotice ways im got replaced, no im toxic waste
so id drop the case before i cock thes tre 8 and send shots to your face

[$outhernBell]

that was pretty good. your vocabulary was wide, good flow, started off and ended nicely, and good concept over all. only thing i would say is that you have quite a few errors in your writing and you should take time to type your stuff right ... because its really good. you can see that your occupation reflexs on your writing and thats great ... builds ... character in your work. good job