The Way To Be

[survce]

You know that feeling that you get
When it can't get no worse then this
And all you feel is emptiness
And life is like its meaningless
My past it cast a shadow like
That nothing that I do is right
And all them bruises that I earn
Its like I'm never gonna learn
And every time I make a turn
I'm looking back at bridges burned
My friends they start to fade away
I'm losing one like everyday
At night I might not ever pray
But try my best to write and say
More less confess in my own way
For all mistakes I ever made
Never thought I'd be the one
To stop and think before I run
Ashamed of all the shit I've done
I can't remember having fun
Looking back at all the times
I was all ways in a bind
Once again I'm on rewind
I gotta get it through my mind
And even though I see a sign
I'm walking on a crooked line
What's it gonna take for me
To open up my eyes and see
This fuckin life of misery
I know its not the way to be

[gutawafang]

Flow and structure is good. Content and concept can be improved. But I feel it. Good work man.

[survce]

Thanks

[Fa-Q]

Lines could be a bit longer...but you got flow and structure...and experiement with some multis here and there but prettyy good drop

[Just Silver]

a little choppy but its all good

gotta hone those multi skills