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K.N.I.F.E. ft Enimee and Fa-Q and Eminem

Postby Edge » Feb 13th, '10, 17:11

feed appreciated :D

Enimee:
razor sharp with a blade to the heart of a fake
i start with a straight then switch to serate
i got everything from butterflies to pens it all depends
on the neccessary device needed to end
this gun fight, make sure my bayonet is attached right
slash slice, stab right, last fight, open the gash nice
leter openers and box cutters swords and swash bucklers
a hook to stop fuckers and sever libs with one drop of it
ive honed and master this technique to attack arteries
to hack these smaller freaks so they're no longer hard to eat
its an art to me fa-q and edge to butcher every opponent we facin
dispensing of combatants with a blade is contageous
come, try it grasp it tightly thrust to the heart of your enemy
deftly bash there brains in with the hilt and end the
discussion on whats better just cut them and dont let up
insert into the soft point and twist that shit untill he wont get up

Sample of Eminem:
Switchblade, with a little switch to switch blades
And switch from a six to a sixteen inch blade
Shit's like a samurai sword or sensai

Edge:
K.N.I.F.E.
i got my knife with me
K.N.I.F.E.
so why ya tryin me?

Sample of Eminem:
walked into a gunfight with a knife to kill you
And cut you so fast when your blood spilled it was still blue

Edge:
ya see, to me, using a gun is extremely pussy
anyone could shoot a man, run, and not have to-see
thats why i keep my knife, always tucked in my pocket
so you could grab your gun, load it up and cock it
as your doing that, youl just get stabbed-in-your-ribs
than i walk in you house and start jabbing-your-kids
Slashin-ya-crib, im just so fucken crazy-with-a-razor
stab a cop's stomach, as he trys to slay-me-with-a-taser
i dont give a fuck, im all about slashin-ya-face
im fast-in-this-race, you get stabbed-in-disgrace
youl be staying up in the I.C.U. for a punctured-lung
i stabbed you so quick u couldnt touch-your-gun
its funny how i come with a knife, you got artilery
im really nice with a knife, i posses skillful ability
so in the end, i promise that you wont be killin me
a knife in your gut is the reason shells wont be fillin me

Sample of Eminem:
Switchblade, with a little switch to switch blades
And switch from a six to a sixteen inch blade
Shit's like a samurai sword or sensai

Edge:
K.N.I.F.E.
i got my knife with me
K.N.I.F.E.
so why ya tryin me?

Sample of Eminem:
walked into a gunfight with a knife to kill you
And cut you so fast when your blood spilled it was still blue

Fa-Q:
I'm an abortion doctor, I'll grab you out the womb,
I tried to stab you with a spoon, but didn't dab the wound,
But I decided to go back to my roots, and I attack suits,
With sharpened blades, stabbin darkened maids,
Cutting their clothes off, and nothing but this rose is soft,
I use the thorns for a blade, to attack this orange babe,
She over tans, so I'm gonna trap her in a tanning bed,
Shit, that pale fucking cunt Dakota Fanning's dead,
And I was planning to shred, her into a paper shredder,
Put a ice pack over her wounds just to maker her better,
Ima gonna break her legs, then take her eggs,
Then I'm gonna fuck her flower bed, til the strems annoyed,
Then leave something extra on her ass, like a hemroid,
I'll tell her, I don't have to use a knife, I'll use a ball point pen,
And stab each of your legs, until all yer joints bend,
The handle is made from Bic, or is that paper mate,
Drug this cunt, the video tape her state,
Tease her fence, unlock it, then rape her gate,

Sample of Eminem:
Switchblade, with a little switch to switch blades
And switch from a six to a sixteen inch blade
Shit's like a samurai sword or sensai

Edge:
K.N.I.F.E.
i got my knife with me
K.N.I.F.E.
so why ya tryin me?

Sample of Eminem:
walked into a gunfight with a knife to kill you
And cut you so fast when your blood spilled it was still blue
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
Edge
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Re: K.N.I.F.E. ft Enimee and Fa-Q and Eminem

Postby Edge » Feb 13th, '10, 18:25

good shit guys
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: K.N.I.F.E. ft Enimee and Fa-Q and Eminem

Postby classthe_king » Feb 13th, '10, 18:43

I thought the chorus was sweet as fuck. Good idea. Overall good piece, but it got kind of boring just talking about knives the whole time and stabbing people. Fa-q mixed it up but that kind of creeped me out a little bit. You started to sound alot like eminem. Enimee and edge, good rhyming but just try to be more creative.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: K.N.I.F.E. ft Enimee and Fa-Q and Eminem

Postby Edge » Feb 13th, '10, 22:10

classthe_king wrote:I thought the chorus was sweet as fuck. Good idea. Overall good piece, but it got kind of boring just talking about knives the whole time and stabbing people. Fa-q mixed it up but that kind of creeped me out a little bit. You started to sound alot like eminem. Enimee and edge, good rhyming but just try to be more creative.


thanks man, wasnt sure how people would like the chorus so i almost completely changed it up
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Re: K.N.I.F.E. ft Enimee and Fa-Q and Eminem

Postby Element. » Feb 13th, '10, 22:29

I liked this man, keep it up
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Re: K.N.I.F.E. ft Enimee and Fa-Q and Eminem

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 14th, '10, 02:40

Wow :unsure: yeah lol naw that was dope like the little em quotes and everyones verses was pretty cool. Fa-Q :shakehead: weirdo man. lol Nice concept yall good shit
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Re: K.N.I.F.E. ft Enimee and Fa-Q and Eminem

Postby Edge » Feb 15th, '10, 16:53

bump
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