Coleon and Class- Catacombs of the Mind

[classthe_king]

Get off our nuts


(Sentus)
A ghost that’s possessed spittin ferocious and fresh,
I'm going to take Coleon and start roastin his flesh
That's what I mean when I propose a toast to the best
With each rhyme I spit you’re a step closer to death
I rose from the depths bleeding, while hoistin a blade
Spittin the same shit from what the poison was made
Destroyin ya aid, at first glance I aint what I seem to be
Even Freddy won't sleep, he's afraid he'll dream of me
Weak emcees tried to step but I kept killin they kin
Rip the flesh off my body and reveal the reptilian skin
Met a million men at Thermopylae in the heart of the fight n'
Stood and fought with blades harder then diamond
Be on guard cause the titan will shatter the bones of ya spine
I get so mentally prepared for battle I foam from the mind
The illuminati is everywhere, controlling unborn slaves
So we can't speak, the walls have ears like a corn maze

(Chorus)
Catacombs of the mind where lines are frozen in time
A cloak and a spike, steadily rove through the night
Imposing our might, insight from the mind’s catacombs
Class & Cole, fashionin’ bones just for slashin’ your throats

(Coleon)
Pray in the depths tastin the neck of a dame in distress
brainwaves lay you to rest in the wake of my steps
breakin sweats, outpacin my death, zombies cravin my flesh
the organs I possess and next the brains in my head
wonder days in distress, pass out on hell's door steps
pulled into gorey depths in a sec by Satan's forceps
the four lords set, having enjoyed my forlorne treck
through a war torn set of fire as a whore born wretch
my scorns stored, kept in a think tank of split identities
wicked entities possessin my inner sanctity, betrayin me
enslaving my sanktum, I flee but they keep chasin me
bayonets and razors I need to bleed out the pain in me
rusty blades'll leave scars, but skin is a minor component
in the life of an omen, hell sent & bent on slicin you open
my eyes finally open, my nightmares been lightend and broken
but I can't breathe, my eyes bleed, I'm dyin and chokin

(Chorus)

[mcZu]

This is dope, not great, not terrible, but slightly above average. Enjoyed it though. Keep it up guys, pause.

[Spyder]

title is nice

class - nice multies in there, some nice wordplay in there. like the cornmaze line. seen alot better from you but not a bad peice.

Coleon - had the better verse imo, that being said not fantastic, nice multies of course and everything flowed well but not great.

overall - decent drop, i liked it. concept was ehh for me but you guys did alright with it
i didnt like the hook but overall prolly a 7/10

[classthe_king]

Thanks zu and Spyder. And yeah, I finished this verse like a month ago but cole took forever to do his And this was dope, i'll hit you up next time i just write a hot 16.

[FAME]

freaking sweet dudes
First off I was feeling both of your verses, I mean they were just great imo. Plus the chorus was pretty catchy and fit the entire tone of the piece well.

Any hope you guys will record this?

[mcZu]

^We could always record our collab, or do something new.

[classthe_king]

:worship: freaking sweet dudes
First off I was feeling both of your verses, I mean they were just great imo. Plus the chorus was pretty catchy and fit the entire tone of the piece well.

Any hope you guys will record this?

I'd have to rewrite that for it to flow great and Class curb stomped his mic for beefin so no prob not

Thanks fame

And zu, i want to be apart of a new collab

[mcZu]

^We could always record our collab, or do something new.

Now We Say? hmmm link me to it, my stuff was probably wack

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=66062&start=0&hilit=Now+We+Say

And zu, i want to be apart of a new collab

Word, we can make something happen.

[mcZu]

^Word.

[Fa-Q]

Fuck....both verses were dope, I love that freddy line with Sent, and the last half the verse or like the last six bars really ended the verse well...good drop yall

[Yah-hah]

Freddy line from class

[classthe_king]

Thanks both of you