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Marijuana Madness [quick verse]

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Marijuana Madness [quick verse]

Postby DƎRDYPK » Feb 15th, '10, 21:11

This isn't Melatonin Magik I got Marijuana Madness
If my girl was here you know i'd I lay her ass onna matress
voices in my head tell me what they wanna practice
I swallow burnt matches point guns at an actress
all these hollywood scum try to invade this red carpet
smack Miley Cyrus with a 40 ounce she my next target
I need some purkasette cause it really works the stress
cause everytime I hitta bong that shit really hurts my chest
I spend my life doing nothing but sitting at a desk
I go to smoke the finest weed & I feel no effects
freestyling in my mind type it up on to the keypad
tell em don't mess with Mike! askin why? cause he bad
The only raps I smoke must be filled with trees
& everytime I do that inside mind I killed these
brain cells slowly. none of friends know me
i'm just sitting here high spaced out i'm so lonley
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Re: Marijuana Madness [quick verse]

Postby classthe_king » Feb 15th, '10, 21:22

Good shit, the flow was great on this. Rhyming was alright
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Marijuana Madness [quick verse]

Postby Ticalrecords » Feb 15th, '10, 21:30

i was feelin it. got a lil depressing in the end
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Re: Marijuana Madness [quick verse]

Postby DƎRDYPK » Feb 15th, '10, 21:36

Thanks Class & Tical :8)
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