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Re: My freestyle

Postby FAME » Feb 15th, '10, 22:36

Well I'll be honest here...some of it didn't even rhyme :unsure:
But I'm glad that the CW has more people dropping, hopefully if your really into it some of the vets can help you.

@ the thread though.... :laughing:
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Re: My freestyle

Postby Element. » Feb 15th, '10, 22:43

@Shadyfreakzul

If i beat you i must be better,

And no your pussy words dont hurt me, Just callin me a retard just for not seeing what you put in caps your fuckin' stupid man you could have split the quote and put somethin back on the same post :o didnt you know that?

Someone get this dude to chew on some words to keep him occupied.
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Re: My freestyle

Postby shadyfreakzul » Feb 15th, '10, 22:44

i 'll take your word.thats what i was expecting and not fags saying shit.
I'm strong, my word is Bond like James
Niggaz be tryin to test, but they 'week' like seven days-Canibus

I don't belong here,my dad fucked my mom in the wrong year.-Budden

like taekwondo you lack punches-Shadyfreakzul

Around here i am the Goat like the Capricorn.-Wale
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Re: My freestyle

Postby Element. » Feb 15th, '10, 22:45

shadyfreakzul wrote:i 'll take your word.thats what i was expecting and not fags saying shit.


Dude i said some stuff about your rhymes and i said keep workin' at it, and you had to go all ape shit at me.
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Re: My freestyle

Postby shadyfreakzul » Feb 15th, '10, 22:48

Smithy wrote:
shadyfreakzul wrote:i 'll take your word.thats what i was expecting and not fags saying shit.


Dude i said some stuff about your rhymes and i said keep workin' at it, and you had to go all ape shit at me.

when did you talk about my rhymes.
I'm strong, my word is Bond like James
Niggaz be tryin to test, but they 'week' like seven days-Canibus

I don't belong here,my dad fucked my mom in the wrong year.-Budden

like taekwondo you lack punches-Shadyfreakzul

Around here i am the Goat like the Capricorn.-Wale
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Re: My freestyle

Postby Element. » Feb 15th, '10, 22:51

its in this thread dude im on about.
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Re: My freestyle

Postby Solace » Feb 15th, '10, 23:27

lol what.
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Re: My freestyle

Postby shadyfreakzul » Feb 15th, '10, 23:28

Smithy wrote:Lol :( thanks Classic being sarcastic
anyway yeah didnt mean it in a bad way its just what everyone use to say to me but keep doin ya thing and you'll get there.

u did not say anything about my rhyme here....ayway i did not read it and i guess i misinterpreted you.forget all these things i aint got beef with anyone. :y:
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Niggaz be tryin to test, but they 'week' like seven days-Canibus

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Around here i am the Goat like the Capricorn.-Wale
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Re: My freestyle

Postby Solace » Feb 15th, '10, 23:30

:flutter: The beef is squashed! :thumbsup2:
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Re: My freestyle

Postby tjb » Feb 15th, '10, 23:32

Smithy wrote:
shadyfreakzul wrote:
Smithy wrote:? not sayin anythin else shadyfreakzul. just a quote

CHECK IN THE QUOTE RETARD!!!!! MY LINES ARE IN CAPS.



Calm your shit down, i may be wack but my shits good enough to beat you, fuckin' faggot



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Re: My freestyle

Postby shadyfreakzul » Feb 15th, '10, 23:34

Solace wrote::flutter: The beef is squashed! :thumbsup2:

:y:
I'm strong, my word is Bond like James
Niggaz be tryin to test, but they 'week' like seven days-Canibus

I don't belong here,my dad fucked my mom in the wrong year.-Budden

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Around here i am the Goat like the Capricorn.-Wale
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Re: My freestyle

Postby Element. » Feb 15th, '10, 23:35

Alryt man :y:
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