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Verbal Murder

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Verbal Murder

Postby mcZu » Feb 17th, '10, 01:56

Face me? You couldn’t beat me if I stopped and shooked
Make you feel like Elin Nordegren, how you wished you knocked on Woods
I knock MC’s over, I’m exposing ‘em like ON wire’s
Why ride when you don’t know what a race-is like John Mayer
It’s on, you can hire anyone you think you can get your hands at man
And then clap and ask or demand for more than just an axe man
Make you re-shake as if I’m mother nature and you’re Haiti
You’re just a remake, I have to turn you down like Jay-Z
Listening to these garbage rappers bitching like a double uterus
How Low can the game go? It’s troublesome, it’s Ludicrous
I’ll slaughter any one going against me, I’ll walk on water
Without bending my knees, I’ll put ya blood in the air like a gothic daughter
For starters, I black out when I make up rhymes, call Zu mascara
I’ll replace Meth, Ghost and Rae if ya ask me ‘Who Massacres?’ a-
-Beat when they’re on it while beating the odds like kicking the disabled
I’m kicking a diss able to disable a beat when the odds are likely
To be in favour of me, so I'm favouring me, and I Know Ya Want Me
Bunch of Pitbull bitches, you can all just bite me..
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
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Re: Verbal Murder

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 17th, '10, 02:03

Hahah love that Jay-Z line... I guess earthquakes are just open season, no hurricanes or tornados, but nobody gives a fuck if you make fun of earthquakes :laughing: anyway good drop Zu
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Re: Verbal Murder

Postby Emadyville » Feb 17th, '10, 02:41

Flow was dope, rhymes, metaphors, wordplay, all of the above, great shit :worship:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


I love you Daren
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Re: Verbal Murder

Postby mcZu » Feb 17th, '10, 19:00

Thanks guys, appreciated it.
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Re: Verbal Murder

Postby gvdz » Feb 17th, '10, 19:13

Zu do you write in dutch to?
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Re: Verbal Murder

Postby mcZu » Feb 17th, '10, 19:14

Yes I do.
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Re: Verbal Murder

Postby gvdz » Feb 17th, '10, 19:14

mcZu wrote:Yes I do.

ok cool
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